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+++ b/hnreq/hnreq.html	Tue Nov 22 16:17:28 2011 +0100
@@ -59,9 +59,9 @@
       
       <p>There is an increasing amount of personal and streaming (broadcast) content that users would like to be able to access from any device in the home (personal computers, tablets, mobile phones, TVs and others).</p>
       
-      <p>Growing numbers of consumer electronic devices such as TVs and mobile phones can access internet based services as well as content originating from both home network devices and broadcast services. For example, many commercial video providers currently provide the ability for a user to access content stored on a home network device (e.g. a digital video recorder, DVR) or from a network connected set-top-box, STB. A home network content discovery and control protocol is used by the DVR and STB to provide this access, through a native user interface on the device.</p>
+      <p>Growing numbers of consumer electronic devices such as TVs and mobile phones can access internet based services as well as content originating from both home network devices and broadcast services. For example, many commercial video providers currently provide the ability for a user to access content stored on a home network device (e.g. a <abbr title="digital video recorder">DVR</abbr>) or accessed via a network connected <abbr title="set-top box">STB</abbr>. A home network content discovery and control protocol is used by the DVR and STB to provide this access, through a native user interface, to other devices in the home (e.g. PCs, TVs).</p>
 
-      <p>The dominant scenario today is for a home network device to both discover and playback home network content.  Examples of these devices may include a personal computer or a connected television. This is commonly referred to as a 2-Box model. An emerging scenario is for the content discovery and control to take place on a separate handheld device, such as a smartphone or tablet computer, and for the handheld device to instruct a content player, a connected television for instance, to playback content from a content server such as a DVR. This is referred to as the 3-Box model.</p>
+      <p>The dominant scenario today is for a home network device to both discover and playback home network content. Examples of these devices may include personal computers or connected televisions. This is commonly referred to as a 2-Box model. An emerging scenario is for the content discovery and control to take place on a separate handheld device, such as a smartphones or tablets. The handheld device then instructs a content player (e.g. a TV) to playback content from a content server (e.g. a DVR). This is referred to as the 3-Box model.</p>
 
       <p>In all use cases, security mechanisms are made available to protect user privacy and content owners’ rights.</p>
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
         <dd>An individual resource that adheres to a certain content type, ranging from short static documents to long essays or reports with rich multimedia. For simplicity, terms such as shown, displayed, and visible might sometimes be used when referring to the way a document is rendered to the user. These terms are not meant to imply a visual medium; they must be considered to apply to other media in equivalent ways.</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>application</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “application” refers to a collection of documents (not necessarily delivered over HTTP) which use server-side or client-side processing to provide an "native application-like" experience within a Web browser or other kinds of Web run-time. Applications may include locally executable elements of interactivity and persistent state. Note that locally stored applications like W3C Widgets [[WIDGETS]] are intended to be covered by this definition.</dd>
+        <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “application” refers to a collection of documents (not necessarily delivered over HTTP) which use server-side or client-side processing to provide a "native application"-like experience within a Web browser or other kinds of Web run-time. Applications may include locally executable elements of interactivity and persistent state. Note that locally stored applications like W3C Widgets [[WIDGETS]] are intended to be covered by this definition.</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>home network</dfn></dt>
         <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “home network” refers to the networking infrastructure that facilitates Internet Protocol communications between devices within the home. This may range from a single legacy IPv4 subnet to multiple IPv4 subnets and dual stack or IPv6 environments and will typically (but not always) be connected to the Internet.</dd>