--- a/hnreq/hnreq.html	Mon Nov 21 12:21:16 2011 +0100
+++ b/hnreq/hnreq.html	Tue Nov 22 12:34:22 2011 +0100
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
     </section>
 
     <section id="sotd">
-      <p>Recommendations in this document are the result of dicussions in the Home Network Task Force of the Web and TV Interest Group. The Home Network Task Force believes that most of these recommendations listed in this document will be refined and addressed within the Device APIs Working Group, as part of its work on a devices and services discovery API standard. In particular, while the Home Network Task Force may continue to discuss areas of home networking scenarios that have not already been raised in this document, it does not anticipate further work on the scenarios and requirements highlighted in this document within the Web and TV Interest Group.</p>
+      <p>Recommendations in this document are the result of discussion in the Home Network Task Force of the Web and TV Interest Group. The Home Network Task Force believes that most of these recommendations listed in this document will be refined and addressed within the Device APIs Working Group, as part of its work on a devices and services discovery API standard. In particular, while the Home Network Task Force may continue to discuss areas of home networking scenarios that have not already been raised in this document, it does not anticipate further work on the scenarios and requirements highlighted in this document within the Web and TV Interest Group.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
         <dd>A programme (program) comprises a single period of audio visual content. It is usually expected to be labeled in content directories or television programme guides as a single entity. This might include an episode of a television programme, a radio programme, or a movie.</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>device</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>For the purposes of this document, a device is any piece of equipment connected to the <a>home network</a>. Note that this is a generic term that includes also <a>television</a> definition below.</dd>
+        <dd>For the purposes of this document, a device is any piece of equipment connected to the <a>home network</a>. Note that this is a generic term that also includes <a>television</a> (defined below).</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>television</dfn></dt>
         <dd>A <a>device</a> that presents <a>programme</a> content from a variety of sources - such as received via broadcast (cable, satellite, terrestrial), on-demand streaming services, or streamed from other devices in the home (e.g. PVR). Within the scope of this document, it is presumed that a television is connected to the <a>home network</a>.</dd>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
         <dd>An individual resource that adheres to a certain content type, ranging from short static documents to long essays or reports with rich multimedia. For simplicity, terms such as shown, displayed, and visible might sometimes be used when referring to the way a document is rendered to the user. These terms are not meant to imply a visual medium; they must be considered to apply to other media in equivalent ways.</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>application</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “application” refers to a collection of documents (not necessarily delivered over HTTP) which use server-side or client-side processing (e.g. JavaScript) to provide an "application-like" experience within a Web browser or other kinds of Web run-time. Applications may include locally executable elements of interactivity and persistent state. Note that locally stored applications like W3C Widgets [[WIDGETS]] are also covered by this definition.</dd>
+        <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “application” refers to a collection of documents (not necessarily delivered over HTTP) which use server-side or client-side processing to provide an "native application-like" experience within a Web browser or other kinds of Web run-time. Applications may include locally executable elements of interactivity and persistent state. Note that locally stored applications like W3C Widgets [[WIDGETS]] are intended to be covered by this definition.</dd>
 
         <dt><dfn>home network</dfn></dt>
         <dd>For the purposes of this document, the term “home network” refers to the networking infrastructure that facilitates Internet Protocol communications between devices within the home. This may range from a single legacy IPv4 subnet to multiple IPv4 subnets and dual stack or IPv6 environments and will typically (but not always) be connected to the Internet.</dd>