[imsc] address ACTION-244
authorpal@sandflow.org
Wed, 12 Feb 2014 22:56:48 -0800
changeset 596 f32bd11bc601
parent 595 0c9dcb289c00
child 597 a6e693d1cfa1
[imsc] address ACTION-244
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Wed Jan 29 22:44:17 2014 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Wed Feb 12 22:56:48 2014 -0800
@@ -130,6 +130,12 @@
 .section dl.attrs dd, .section dl.eldef dd {
     margin-bottom:  0;
 }
+
+@media print {
+    .removeOnSave {
+        display: none;
+    }
+}
 </style><style>/* --- EXAMPLES --- */
 div.example-title {
     min-width: 7.5em;
@@ -211,7 +217,7 @@
   </p>
   <h1 class="title p-name" id="title" property="dcterms:title">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions</h1>
   
-  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-01-10T03:28:06.000Z" id="w3c-editor-s-draft-09-january-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-01-09">09 January 2014</time></h2>
+  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-02-13T14:52:26.000Z" id="w3c-editor-s-draft-13-february-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-02-13">13 February 2014</time></h2>
   <dl>
     
       <dt>This version:</dt>
@@ -226,6 +232,7 @@
     
     
     
+    
       
     
     
@@ -310,6 +317,7 @@
           </p>
         
         
+        
         <p>
           
             This document was produced by a group operating under the 
@@ -2013,7 +2021,8 @@
       <section id="reference-fonts">
         <h4 aria-level="3" role="heading" id="h4_reference-fonts"><span class="secno">7.2.2 </span>Reference Fonts</h4>
 
-        <p>A glyph that matches one of the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in the table below <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL">SHALL</em> be laid out using  metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the
+        <p>A glyph that matches one of the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in the table below <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL">SHALL</em> be laid out using
+		metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the
         reference font.</p>
 
         <table class="simple">
@@ -2112,9 +2121,10 @@
         
 	<p></p>
 	
-<p>In other words, the character set specified in Table 1 is available to authors across all languages, and Table 2 specifies characters that have proven useful in captioning and subtitling applications for a given language. Some of these sets may overlap.</p>
-	
-	 <p>The terms used in this table are defined in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-UNICODE">UNICODE</a></cite>].</p>
+<p>Some of these sets may overlap.</p>
+
+<p>Table 1 captures the set of characters intended to be available to authors across all languages.
+The terms used in the table are defined in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-UNICODE">UNICODE</a></cite>].</p>
 
     <table class="simple">
 	<caption>Table 1. Common Character Set.</caption>
@@ -2291,6 +2301,8 @@
     </tbody></table>
 
 	<br>
+	<p>
+	Table 2 specifies supplementary character set that have proven useful in captioning and subtitling applications for a number of selected languages. Table 2 is non-exhaustive, and will be extended as needs arise.</p>
 	
     <table class="simple">
 	<caption>Table 2. Supplementary Character Sets.</caption>
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Wed Jan 29 22:44:17 2014 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Wed Feb 12 22:56:48 2014 -0800
@@ -1726,7 +1726,8 @@
       <section>
         <h4>Reference Fonts</h4>
 
-        <p>A glyph that matches one of the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in the table below SHALL be laid out using  metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the
+        <p>A glyph that matches one of the combinations of computed font family and code point listed in the table below SHALL be laid out using
+		metrics equal to the metrics of the specified reference font, unless the glyph is not defined by the
         reference font.</p>
 
         <table class='simple'>
@@ -1828,9 +1829,10 @@
         </ul>
 	</p>
 	
-<p>In other words, the character set specified in Table 1 is available to authors across all languages, and Table 2 specifies characters that have proven useful in captioning and subtitling applications for a given language. Some of these sets may overlap.</p>
-	
-	 <p>The terms used in this table are defined in [[!UNICODE]].</p>
+<p>Some of these sets may overlap.</p>
+
+<p>Table 1 captures the set of characters intended to be available to authors across all languages.
+The terms used in the table are defined in [[!UNICODE]].</p>
 
     <table class='simple'>
 	<caption>Table 1. Common Character Set.</caption>
@@ -2007,6 +2009,8 @@
     </table>
 
 	<br>
+	<p>
+	Table 2 specifies supplementary character set that have proven useful in captioning and subtitling applications for a number of selected languages. Table 2 is non-exhaustive, and will be extended as needs arise.</p>
 	
     <table class='simple'>
 	<caption>Table 2. Supplementary Character Sets.</caption>