--- a/rdf-concepts/index.html	Wed Oct 16 11:28:35 2013 -0400
+++ b/rdf-concepts/index.html	Wed Oct 16 11:37:38 2013 -0400
@@ -1308,15 +1308,15 @@
     generalization of RDF triples.</p>
 		
 		<p>A <dfn title="generalized RDF triple">generalized RDF
-			triple</dfn> is a triple having a subject, a predicate
-			and object that each can be an <a title="iri">IRI</a>, a 
+			triple</dfn> is a triple having a subject, a predicate,
+			and object, where each can be an <a title="iri">IRI</a>, a 
 			<a title="blank node">blank node</a> or a
 			<a>literal</a>. A
 			<dfn title="generalized RDF graph">generalized RDF graph</dfn>
 			is a set of generalized RDF triples. A
 			<dfn title="generalized RDF dataset">generalized RDF dataset</dfn>
-			comprises a distinguished generalized RDF graphs and zero
-			or more pairs associating an IRI, a blank node or a literal
+			comprises a distinguished generalized RDF graph, and zero
+			or more pairs each associating an IRI, a blank node or a literal
 			to a generalized RDF graph.</p>
 		
 
@@ -1327,7 +1327,7 @@
 			by allowing <a title="IRI">IRIs</a>,
 			<a title="blank node">blank nodes</a> and
 			<a>literals</a> to appear
-			anywhere as subject, predicate, object or graph name.</p>
+			in any position, i.e., as subject, predicate, object or graph names.</p>
 
     <p class="note" id="note-generalized-rdf"> Any users of
     generalized RDF triples, graphs or datasets need to be