--- a/rdf-primer/index.html	Tue Nov 05 17:16:51 2013 +0100
+++ b/rdf-primer/index.html	Tue Nov 05 17:15:13 2013 +0000
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
       <figcaption>Informal graphs of the four sample triples</figcaption>
     </figure>
 
-    <p class="issue">The following is just one way of representing RDF in relational terms</p>
+    <p class="issue">The following is just one way of representing RDF in relational terms, not sure it is needed</p>
 
     <p class="note">Readers familiar with databases could view the RDF
     data model as a binary database model, where every distinct
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
     <p>In the following sections we discuss the three basic constructs
     that appear in RDF statements, namely IRIs, literals and blank nodes, in more detail. </p>
 
-    <p class="issue">Should the text below depend on the existence of the 'generalized data model' in RDF semantics?</p>
+    <p class="issue">Should the text below mention the 'generalized data model' in RDF semantics?</p>
 
     </section>
 
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@
       <p>Literals can appear in the object position of an RDF statement. Examples of literals include
       strings such as "La Joconde", dates such as "the 4th of July, 1990" and numbers such as "3.14159". 
       Litterals are associated with a <i>datatype</i> enabling such values to be parsed and interpreted correctly. 
-      Strings can optionally be associated with a <i>language tag</i>. For example "Léonardo de Vinci" could
+      Strings can optionally be associated with a <i>language tag</i>. For example "Léonard de Vinci" could
       be associated with the "fr" language tag and "李奥纳多·达·文西" with the "zh" language tag.</p>
    
     </section>