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<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Basic Container</dfn> (<abbr title="Linked Data Platform Basic Container">LDP-BC</abbr>)</dt>
<dd>An <a title="Linked Data Platform Container">LDPC</a> that uses a predefined predicate to simply link to
- its contained (ldp:contains) resources.
+ its <a title="Containment">contained</a> resources.
<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Direct Container</dfn> (<abbr title="Linked Data Platform Direct Container">LDP-DC</abbr>)</dt>
@@ -315,16 +315,17 @@
<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Indirect Container</dfn> (<abbr title="Linked Data Platform Indirect Container">LDP-IC</abbr>)</dt>
- <dd>An <a title="Linked Data Platform Container">LDPC</a> that similar to a <a title="Linked Data Platform Direct Container">LDP-DC</a>
- but it allows an indirection with the ability to list as member a resource that is different from the one that is created.
- <p></p></dd>
+ <dd>An <a title="Linked Data Platform Container">LDPC</a> that is similar to a <a title="Linked Data Platform Direct Container">LDP-DC</a>
+ but it allows an indirection with the ability to list as member a resource, such as a URI representing a real-world object,
+ that is different from the resource that is created.
+ <p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Membership</dfn></dt>
- <dd>The relationship binding an LDP-RR (LDPCs are also LDP-RRs) and its members LDPRs. There often is a LDPCs that assists with
- managing the member LDPRs.<p></p></dd>
+ <dd>The relationship linking an LDP-RR (LDPCs are also LDP-RRs) and its members LDPRs.
+ There often is a linked LDPCs that assists with managing the member LDPRs.<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Containment</dfn></dt>
- <dd>The relationship binding an LDPC to its contained LDPRs. This link is direction between the LDPC and its contained LDPRs. The
+ <dd>The relationship binding an LDPC to its contained LDPRs. The
lifecycle of the contained LDPR, depends on the containing LDPC.<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Membership triples</dfn></dt>
@@ -545,7 +546,7 @@
on the Web today: images, html pages, word processing documents, spreadsheets, etc and LDP-RRs often serve a purpose to manage the
metadata associated with LDP-BRs.
</p>
- <figure id="fig-ldpr-kinds">
+ <figure id="fig-ldpr-types">
<img src="images/ldpr1.png" alt="Sample separation of Linked Data Platform Resource" />
<figcaption>Samples of different types of LDPRs</figcaption>
</figure>
@@ -753,7 +754,7 @@
<section id="ldpr-put-simpleupdate"><h2 class="normal"><a title="LDP server">LDP servers</a> SHOULD allow clients to update resources without
requiring detailed knowledge of server-specific constraints.
- This is a consequence of the requirement to enable simple creation and modification of LPDRs.
+ This is a consequence of the requirement to enable simple creation and modification of LDPRs.
</h2></section><!-- Was 4.5.7 / #ldpr-4_5_7 -->
</section>
@@ -1662,7 +1663,7 @@
<section id="ldpc-post-mincontraints"><h2 class="normal"><a title="LDP server">LDP servers</a> SHOULD allow clients to create new resources without
requiring detailed knowledge of application-specific constraints.
- This is a consequence of the requirement to enable simple creation and modification of LPDRs.
+ This is a consequence of the requirement to enable simple creation and modification of LDPRs.
<!-- TODO: Consider reference to 4.2.13 to include Link rel='desribedBy' header for such constraints.
Also, should this call out LDPRs explicity? Would think we could just have "resources" statement. -->
</h2></section><!-- Was 5.4.9 / #ldpc-5_4_9 -->