Better 3.3.5.2.
--- a/ldpatch.html Fri Nov 21 14:31:23 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldpatch.html Fri Nov 21 14:44:54 2014 -0500
@@ -646,17 +646,20 @@
<h3>Example</h3>
<p>
- Here is an illustration of the <a href="#updatelist-algo">previously introduced algorithm</a>. Consider the graph represented in <a href="#fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection"></a>. <a href="#fig-updatelist-result"></a> shows the result of applying an <a>UpdateList</a> operation on that list.
+ Here is an illustration of the <a href="#updatelist-algo">previously introduced algorithm</a>.
+ </p>
+ <p>
+ Consider the graph represented in <a href="#fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection"></a>. The result of applying an <a>UpdateList</a> operation on the collection in that graph can be seen in <a href="#fig-updatelist-result"></a>.
</p>
- <figure>
+ <figure id="fig-a-graph-containing-a-collection">
<img src="fig-alt-update-list.svg" alt="( "e;lorem"e; "e;ipsum"e; "e;dolor"e; "e;sit"e; "e;amet"e; ) ( "e;foo"e; "e;bar"e; "e;baz"e; )">
- <figcaption>A graph containing a collection</figcaption>
+ <figcaption>Graph with a collection</figcaption>
</figure>
<figure id="fig-updatelist-result">
<img src="fig-alt-update-list-2.svg" alt="( "e;lorem"e; "e;ipsum"e; "e;dolor"e; "e;sit"e; "e;amet"e; ) ( "e;foo"e; "e;bar"e; "e;baz"e; )">
- <figcaption>The result of applying <code>UpdateList :s :p 2..4 ("foo" "bar" "baz") .</code> to the graph above.</figcaption>
+ <figcaption>Applying <code>UpdateList</code></figcaption>
</figure>
</section>