More revisions based on review from Miguel and Steve Speicher; still have a few more to go.
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More revisions based on review from Miguel and Steve Speicher; still have a few more to go.
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--- a/ldp-bp/ldp-bp.html	Mon Dec 30 08:28:37 2013 -0600
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@@ -16,6 +16,8 @@
 		// specification status (e.g. WD, LCWD, NOTE, etc.). If in doubt use ED.
 		specStatus : "ED",
 
+		edDraftURI : "https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-bp/ldp-bp.html",
+
 		// the specification's short name, as in http://www.w3.org/TR/short-name/
 		shortName : "ldp-bp",
 
@@ -90,7 +92,7 @@
 		// This is important for Rec-track documents, do not copy a patent URI from a random
 		// document unless you know what you're doing. If in doubt ask your friendly neighbourhood
 		// Team Contact.
-		wgPatentURI : "http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/55082/status",
+		//wgPatentURI : "http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/55082/status",
 		localBiblio : {
 			"LD-DI" : {
 				title : "Linked Data - Design Issues",
@@ -190,7 +192,8 @@
 		and general guidelines for implementing Linked Data Platform servers
 		and clients.</section>
 
-	<section>
+
+	<section id="intro">
 
 		<h2>About this Document</h2>
 
@@ -217,7 +220,7 @@
 
 			<h3>Terminology</h3>
 
-			<p>For the purposes of this document, we have found it useful to
+			<p>For the purposes of this document, it is useful to
 				make a minor, yet important distinction between the term 'best
 				practice' and the term 'guideline'. For the purposes of this
 				document, we define and differentiate the terms as follows:</p>
@@ -227,24 +230,25 @@
 				<dd>An implementation practice (method or technique) that has
 					consistently shown results superior to those achieved with other
 					means and that is used as a benchmark. Best practices within this
-					document apply specifically to the ways that one should implement
-					LDP servers and clients. In this document, the best practices might
-					be used as a kind of check-list against which an implementer can
-					directly evaluate a system's design and code. Lack of adherence to
-					any given best practice, however, does not necessarily imply a lack
-					of quality; they are recommendations that are said to be 'best' in
-					most cases and in most contexts, but not all. A best practice is
-					always subject to improvement as we learn and evolve the Web
-					together.</dd>
+					document apply specifically to the ways that LDP servers and
+					clients are implemented as well as how certain resources should are
+					prepared and used with them. In this document, the best practices
+					might be used as a kind of check-list against which an implementer
+					can directly evaluate a system's design and code. Lack of adherence
+					to any given best practice, however, does not necessarily imply a
+					lack of quality; they are recommendations that are said to be
+					'best' in most cases and in most contexts, but not all. A best
+					practice is always subject to improvement as we learn and evolve
+					the Web together.</dd>
 				<dt>guideline</dt>
 				<dd>A tip, a trick, a note, a suggestion, or answer to a
 					frequently asked question. Guidelines within this document provide
-					useful information that can advance your knowledge and
-					understanding, but that may not be directly applicable to your
+					useful information that can advance an implementer's knowledge and
+					understanding, but that may not be directly applicable to an
 					implementation or recognized by consensus as a 'best practice'.</dd>
 			</dl>
 
-			<p>Please see the Terminology section of the LDP specification
+			<p>Please see the Terminology section in Linked Data Platform 1.0
 				[[LDP1]] as well as the Linked Data Glossary [[LD-GLOSSARY]] for
 				definitions to a variety of terms used in this document and related
 				to the Linked Data sphere of knowledge.</p>
@@ -339,14 +343,14 @@
 				these predicates where possible.</p>
 
 			<p>Of course, it is also a common practice to reuse properties
-				from vocabularies that you don't own. In this case, you typically
-				have no control over the result when attempting to dereference the
-				URI. For this reason, publishers who wish to make their vocabularies
-				useful for linking data should strive to provide a retrievable
-				representation of the properties their vocabularies define.
-				Consequently, implementers are also expected to use this standard as
-				a benchmark for which to judge the efficacy of a vocabulary's use
-				for linking data.</p>
+				from open vocabularies that are publicly available. In this case,
+				implementers have no control over the result when attempting to
+				dereference the URI. For this reason, publishers who wish to make
+				their vocabularies useful for linking data should strive to provide
+				a retrievable representation of the properties their vocabularies
+				define. Consequently, implementers are also expected to use this
+				standard as a benchmark for which to judge the efficacy of a
+				vocabulary's use for linking data.</p>
 
 		</section>
 
@@ -358,11 +362,10 @@
 			<p>
 				It is often very useful to know the type (class) of an LDPR, though
 				it is not essential to work with the interaction capabilities that
-				LDP offers. Still, to make your data more useful in the broadest
-				context, you should explicitly define the type when possible and
-				appropriate and you should use the
+				LDP offers. Still, to make data more useful in the broadest context,
+				type should be explicitly defined using the
 				<code>rdf:type</code>
-				predicate defined by [[RDF-SCHEMA]] when doing so.
+				predicate defined by [[RDF-SCHEMA]].
 			</p>
 
 			<p>This provides a way for clients to easily determine the type
@@ -390,7 +393,7 @@
 				URIs should ideally provide a retrievable representation, Linked
 				Data URIs are usually also URLs; they locate rather than just
 				identify. As such, the utilitarian value of relative URLs still
-				applies; especially since the Container model of the LDP promotes
+				applies; especially since the LDP Container model promotes
 				hierarchical representations.</p>
 
 			<p>Implementers should therefore align the function of relative
@@ -469,7 +472,7 @@
 				container from the vocabularies defined by the <a
 					href="http://open-services.net/">Open Service for Lifecycle
 					Management (OSLC)</a> community. The OSLC defines specifications and
-				vocabularies that are well-aligned to the LDP. A resource in an OSLC
+				vocabularies that are well-aligned to LDP. A resource in an OSLC
 				compliant change management system such as an issue or bug tracker
 				may have attachments represented by the
 				<code>oslc_cm:attachment</code>
@@ -481,19 +484,19 @@
 				<code>http://example.org/bugs/2314/attachments/</code>
 			</p>
 
-			<p>From this URI, you can easily discern the URI of the parent
-				resource, which holds the attachments. You can also discern the base
-				container for other sibling resources by moving up the hierarchy,
-				which is implied by the URI. You might also go down the hierarchy to
-				fetch meta-data or binary content using a URI such as the following:</p>
+			<p>From this URI, the URI of the parent resource which holds the
+				attachments is easily discerned. The base container for other
+				sibling resources can be discerned by moving up the hierarchy, which
+				is implied by the URI. Meta-data or binary content might be fetched
+				further down the hierarchy by using a URI such as the following:</p>
 
 			<p>
 				<code>http://example.org/bugs/2314/attachments/1</code>
 			</p>
 
-			<p>As you can see, in addition to making the use of relative URIs
-				possible, hierarchical URIs make interacting with resources easier
-				because they represent the actual structure of the underlying graph.</p>
+			<p>In addition to making the use of relative URIs possible,
+				hierarchical URIs make interacting with resources easier because
+				they represent the actual structure of the underlying graph.</p>
 
 		</section>
 
@@ -581,11 +584,10 @@
 
 			<p>
 				First, it provides the convenience and efficiency of brevity.
-				Suppose, for example that you want to describe the resources foo,
-				bar and baz, which are contained in the same document. Since serving
-				all of the descriptions in a single document is acceptable, we can
-				mint relative URIs within the document using the fragment identifier
-				(
+				Suppose, for example, the resources foo, bar and baz, which are
+				contained in the same document. Since serving all of the
+				descriptions in a single document is acceptable, we can mint
+				relative URIs within the document using the fragment identifier (
 				<code>&lt;#foo&gt;</code>
 				,
 				<code>&lt;#bar&gt;</code>
@@ -598,9 +600,9 @@
 
 			<p>Second, it can help avoid certain complexities inherent with
 				other approaches. Achieving the same result using three independent
-				dereferenceable URIs could be more involved because you'd need to
-				create and publish multiple documents, perhaps also having to setup
-				303 redirects.</p>
+				dereferenceable URIs could be more involved because multiple
+				documents would have to be published, perhaps also including the
+				setup of 303 redirects.</p>
 
 			<p>
 				<strong>See also:</strong>
@@ -962,8 +964,8 @@
 		<section>
 			<h3>Finding established vocabularies</h3>
 
-			<p>Following are some sources which may be useful for finding and
-				leveraging pre-existing, common, and well-established vocabularies.</p>
+			<p>Following are some useful resources for finding and leveraging
+				pre-existing, common, and well-established vocabularies.</p>
 
 			<p style="clear: both">
 				<img src="lov-thumb.jpg" width="150"
@@ -971,13 +973,13 @@
 					href="http://lov.okfn.org" target="_blank">Linked Open
 					Vocabularies (LOV)</a><br /> LOV is an entry point to the growing
 				ecosystem of linked open vocabularies (RDFS or OWL ontologies) used
-				in the Linked Data Cloud. There you can find vocabularies listed and
+				in the Linked Data Cloud. Users can find vocabularies listed and
 				individually described by metadata, classified by vocabulary spaces,
 				and interlinked using the dedicated vocabulary VOAF. The site allows
-				you to query the LOV dataset either at vocabulary level or at
+				users to query the LOV dataset either at vocabulary level or at
 				element level, exploring the vocabulary content using full-text
 				faceted search, and finding metrics about the use of vocabularies in
-				the Semantic Web. You can also suggest a new vocabulary to add to
+				the Semantic Web. Users can also suggest a new vocabulary to add to
 				LOV. [[LOV]]
 			</p>
 
@@ -992,8 +994,6 @@
 
 			<div style="clear: both"></div>
 
-
-
 		</section>
 
 	</section>
@@ -1001,11 +1001,27 @@
 
 	<section class='appendix'>
 		<h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
-		<p>Many thanks to Robin Berjon for making our lives so much easier
-			with his cool tool.</p>
-		<p>To Ashok Malhotra, Melvin Carvalho, Richard Cyganiak, Steve
-			Speicher, and Miguel Esteban Gutiérrez for providing recommendations
-			for improvement to the editors.</p>
+		<p>Many thanks to Robin Berjon and all contributors to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/respec/">ReSpec</a> tool, which makes writing these kinds of documents much easier.
+		</p>
+		<p>To the following individuals who, in addition to the editors, have contributed either directly or indirectly to the ongoing improvement of this document: 
+			<ul>
+				<li><a href="http://lehors.wordpress.com/">Arnaud Le Hors</a>, IBM</li>
+				<li><a href="http://www.linkedin.com/pub/ashok-malhotra/4/675/6a2">Ashok Malhotra</a>, Oracle</li>
+				<li>Bart van Leeuwen</li>
+				<li>David Wood</li>
+				<li><a href="http://www.w3.org/People/Eric/">Eric Prud'hommeaux</a>, W3C</li>
+				<li>Henry Story</li>
+				<li>John Arwe, IBM</li>
+				<li>Kevin Page</li>
+				<li>Miel Vander Sande</li>
+				<li><a href="http://melvincarvalho.com/">Melvin Carvalho</a></li>
+				<li>Raúl García Castro</li>
+				<li><a href="http://richard.cyganiak.de/">Richard Cyganiak</a></li>
+				<li><a href="http://www.linkedin.com/in/yadnem">Roger Menday</a>, Fujitsu Laboratories of Europe</li>
+				<li><a href="http://www.w3.org/People/Sandro/">Sandro Hawke</a>, W3C</li>
+				<li><a href="http://stevespeicher.blogspot.com/">Steve Speicher</a>, IBM</li>
+				<li>Ted Thibodeau</li>
+			</ul>
 	</section>