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-Linked Data Patch Format (LD Patch) defines a language for expressing a sequence of operations to apply to a RDF Graph; it is suitable for use with the HTTP PATCH method. The "text/ldpatch" media type is used to identify such Patch documents.
+Linked Data Patch Format (LD Patch) defines a language for expressing a sequence of operations to apply to Linked Data resources; it is suitable for use with the HTTP PATCH method. The "text/ldpatch" media type is used to identify such Patch documents.
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This document defines the Linked Data Patch Format (LD Patch), a format for describing changes to apply to Linked Data. It is suitable for use with <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5789">HTTP PATCH</a>, a method to perform partial modifications to Web resources. The "text/ldpatch" media type is used to identify such LD Patch documents.
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-An instance of the LD Patch language (or LD Patch document) defines a list of operations to be performed against an RDF Graph, namely the addition or removal of RDF triples in this graph.
+An instance of the LD Patch language (or LD Patch document) defines a list of operations to be performed against a Linked Data resource, namely the addition or removal of RDF triples in this graph.
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- The LD Patch format described in this document should be seen as an "assembly language" for updating <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/#section-rdf-graph">RDF Graphs</a>. It is the intention to confine its expressive power to an RDF diff with <a href="#pathological-graph">minimal support for blank nodes</a> and <code>rdf:List</code> manipulations. For more powerful operations on RDF Graphs and Quad Stores, the LDP WG recommends the reader to consider <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/sparql11-update/">SPARQL Update</a>.
+ The LD Patch format described in this document should be seen as an "assembly language" for updating <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/#section-rdf-graph">RDF Graphs</a> in a resource-centric fashion. It is the intention to confine its expressive power to an RDF diff with <a href="#pathological-graph">minimal support for blank nodes</a> and <code>rdf:List</code> manipulations. For more powerful operations on RDF Graphs and Quad Stores, the LDP WG recommends the reader to consider <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/sparql11-update/">SPARQL Update</a>.
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<h2 id="considered-alternatives">Considered alternatives</h2>