--- a/ldp-ucr.html	Thu Sep 26 10:33:20 2013 +0100
+++ b/ldp-ucr.html	Thu Sep 26 10:36:18 2013 +0100
@@ -1195,8 +1195,8 @@
 	</p>
 	<ul>
 		<li><a>NF5.1</a>: Multiple changes to a resource: The <a>Project Membership Information</a> user story is concerned with "access to the 'current' state", as distinct from earlier versions. 
-		This is particularly relevant to selective updates which are made with respect to a specific version of the resource description.
-		The LDP must ensure consistent access in the case of multiple simultaneous attempts to update a resource.
+		This is particularly relevant to changes which are made with respect to a specific version of the resource description.
+		The LDP must ensure consistent access in the case of multiple simultaneous attempts to access a resource.
 		</li>
 	</ul>
 	
@@ -1604,7 +1604,7 @@
 		<dd>The system shall permit unrestricted vocabulary, from <a>UC4</a>.
 		</dd>
 		<dt><dfn>NF5.1</dfn>:</dt>
-		<dd>The LDP shall ensure consistent access in the case of multiple simultaneous attempts to update a resource, from <a>UC5</a>.
+		<dd>The LDP shall ensure consistent access in the case of multiple simultaneous attempts to access a resource, from <a>UC5</a>.
 		</dd>
 		<dt><dfn>NF6.1</dfn>:</dt>
 		<dd>The system shall allow resource descriptions that are a "mix of simple data and collections", from <a>UC6</a>.