Some cleanup on the Additional References and Resources section.
authorcburleso
Wed, 14 Aug 2013 17:41:57 -0500
changeset 271 4bdbd8e18c5b
parent 270 7295cd361760
child 272 71b0517fff46
Some cleanup on the Additional References and Resources section.
ldp-bp/ldp-bp.html
--- a/ldp-bp/ldp-bp.html	Mon Aug 12 10:51:37 2013 +0100
+++ b/ldp-bp/ldp-bp.html	Wed Aug 14 17:41:57 2013 -0500
@@ -199,45 +199,41 @@
 				<h4>Additional References and Resources</h4>
 	
 				<p>
-					Implementers should have at least a general familiarity with the <a
-						href="#informative-references">informative references</a> cited in
-					this document. Additionally, implementers should familiarize
-					themselves with the following references, which can be useful study
-					and working references.
+					Implementers should have at least a general familiarity with the <a href="#informative-references">informative references</a> cited in
+					this document. Additionally, the following references are recommended for study.
+				</p>
+
 				<dl class="bibliography">
 	
 					<dt><a name="ldDesignIssues"></a>Linked	Data - Design Issues</dt>
-					<dd>Tim Berners-Lee's (2006-07-27) document, which originated
-						&quot;the four rules&quot; of Linked Data, which outline the key
-						principles behind Linked Data for the World Wide Web.<br />
+					<dd>
+						Tim Berners-Lee's (2006-07-27) document, which originated &quot;the four rules&quot; (key principles) of Linked Data.<br />
 						URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/LinkedData.html">http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/LinkedData.html</a>
-						</dd>
+					</dd>
 	
 					<dt>Linked Data Glossary</dt>
 					<dd>
-						<span data-transform='highlight'>INSERT BYLINE</span><br /> A
-						useful glossary containing terms defined and used to describe
-						Linked Data, and its associated vocabularies and best practices for
-						publishing structured data on the Web.<br /> W3C Working Group
-						Note, 27 June 2013<br /> URL: <a href="">http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/</a>
+						B Hyland, G Atemezing, M Pendleton, B Srivastava<br/>
+						A useful glossary containing terms defined and used to describe Linked Data, and its associated vocabularies 
+						and best practices for publishing structured data on the Web.<br />
+						W3C Working Group Note, 27 June 2013<br />
+						URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/">http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/</a>
 					</dd>
+
 					<dt>Linked Data Platform 1.0 Test Cases</dt>
 					<dd>
-						R García-Castro, et al. <span data-transform='highlight'>dd
-							Month yyyy</span>.<br /> <span data-transform='highlight'>INSERT
-							DOCUMENT ABSTRACT</span><br /> <span data-transform='highlight'>INSERT
-							W3C DOCUMENT TYPE</span><br /> URL: <a
-							href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/Test%20Cases/LDP%20Test%20Cases.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/Test%20Cases/LDP%20Test%20Cases.html</a>
+						R García-Castro, et al.<br />
+						A standard set of tests provided by the W3C, which can be use to verify an implementation's conformance to the LDP specification.<br/> 
+						URL: <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/Test%20Cases/LDP%20Test%20Cases.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/Test%20Cases/LDP%20Test%20Cases.html</a>
 					</dd>
+
 					<dt>Linked Data Platform Primer</dt>
 					<dd>
-						<span data-transform='highlight'>INSERT BYLINE</span><br /> <span
-							data-transform='highlight'>INSERT DOCUMENT ABSTRACT</span><br /> <span
-							data-transform='highlight'>INSERT W3C DOCUMENT TYPE</span><br />
-						URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Primer">http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Primer</a><br />
-						and the new editor's working draft:<br /> URL: <a
-							href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html</a>
+						N Mihindukulasooriya, R Menday, et al.<br/>
+						An introduction to LDP, which describes the basic concepts of LDP such as Linked Data Platform Resources (LDPRs), Linked Data Platform Containers (LDPCs), and their affordances. The Primer provides a running example illustrating how an LDP client can interact with an LDP server in the context of a read-write Linked Data application (i.e. how to use HTTP for accessing, updating, creating and deleting resources from servers that expose their resources as Linked Data).<br/>
+						URL: <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ldpwg/raw-file/default/ldp-primer/ldp-primer.html</a>
 					</dd>
+
 				</dl>
 
 			</section>
@@ -419,7 +415,8 @@
 	
 				<section>
 					<h3>Use fragments as entity identifiers</h3>
-	
+					
+					<p class="note">This needs more detail and an example.</p>
 	
 					<p>Fragments are nice because they can be expressed as relative
 						URIs on the document describing them.</p>