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-      The LDP protocol covers read and write interactions with Resources. Writable aspects include creation of new resources (using POST or PUT), updates (using PUT or PATCH), and deletion of resources. Resource creation is an essential feature providing structured creation of resources. Affordances published by the server show that some Resources can be used to create other Resources. This common pattern is often seen in cases where one resource is made up of a number of others, e.g. a Document Store consists of Documents, a Bug Tracker consists of Bug Reports, a Photo Album consists of Photos, the Net Worth of a person consists of Assets and Liabilities. LDP defines creation for a special kind of Resource called a Container (LDPC), which is able to respond to requests to create new resources, in addition to the general mechanisms HTTP defines. During creation the created resource is added to its Container and a containment link between the Container and the new entry is made.
+      The LDP protocol covers read and write interactions with Resources. Writable aspects include creation of new resources (using POST or PUT), updates (using PUT or PATCH), and deletion of resources. Resource creation is an essential feature providing structured creation of resources. Affordances published by the server show that some Resources can be used to create other Resources. This common pattern is often seen in cases where one resource is made up of a number of others, e.g. a Document Store consists of Documents, a Bug Tracker consists of Bug Reports, a Photo Album consists of Photos, the Net Worth of a person consists of Assets and Liabilities. LDP defines how you can create any kind of Resource using a special kind of Resource called a Container (LDPC) which is able to respond to requests to create new resources. Created resources are added to its Container and a containment link between the Container and the new entry is made.
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-      Therefore a LDPC is a specialization of a LDP-RS representing a collection of links to LDPRs or information resources [[WEBARCH]] that responds to client requests for creation, modification, and/or enumeration of its linked members and documents. The simplest container is the Basic Container (LDP-BC). It defines the basic containment described using a generic vocabulary. This can be used in a generic storage service to manage a containment hierarchy of arbitrary resources.
+      Therefore a Container is able to respond to client requests for creation, modification and enumeration of its contained Resources. The simplest Container is the Basic Container (LDP-BC). It defines the basic containment described using a generic vocabulary. This can be used in a generic storage service to manage a containment hierarchy of arbitrary Resources.
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