--- a/ldp-ucr.html	Thu Sep 26 10:47:39 2013 +0100
+++ b/ldp-ucr.html	Thu Sep 26 10:49:39 2013 +0100
@@ -1283,10 +1283,10 @@
 		defines a collection of subject headings. This collection is
 		defined as a <tt>skos:ConceptScheme</tt> and the client wishes to insert a
 		new concept into the scheme. which will be related to the
-		collection via a <tt>skos:inScheme</tt> link. In the example below, the new subject-heading,
+		collection via a <tt>skos:inScheme</tt> link. In the example below, a new subject-heading,
 		"outer space exploration" is added to the <tt>scheme:subject-heading</tt> collection. The following RDF describes the (item-level)
-		description of the collection.
-		This example also demonstrates that the relationship between the parent and child resources may run in a seemingly counter-intuitive direction, from child to parent.
+		description of the collection,
+		also demonstrating that the relationship between the parent and child resources may run in a seemingly counter-intuitive direction, from child to parent.
 		</p>
 	<pre class='example'>
 @prefix scheme : &lt;http://example.com/concept-scheme/&gt;.