Editorial changes from feedback from Sergio
authorsspeiche
Wed, 24 Jul 2013 11:16:30 -0400
changeset 232 c38de2977a87
parent 231 38d1a7faf1c4
child 233 37842c77d995
Editorial changes from feedback from Sergio
ldp.html
--- a/ldp.html	Wed Jul 24 10:30:22 2013 -0400
+++ b/ldp.html	Wed Jul 24 11:16:30 2013 -0400
@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@
 	  5.2.10 Some LDPC's have membership object's that are not directly URIs minted upon LDPC member creation, 
 	  (JohnA) I found these particularly hard to read.  And I perpetrated the SortCollation paragraphs.  
 	  Links to examples might be an 80-20 solution. 
-    - Sergio's comments http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ldp-wg/2013Jul/0072.html
+	- 5.3.1: I'd change the link to the example ("as in the example") to refer the concrete example #, I think example 9. 
+	  Currently does not work when printing.
  -->
 <html>
   <head>
@@ -464,7 +465,7 @@
 	</div>
 	<div id="ldpr-4_3_4" class="rule">4.3.4 LDPR servers MAY provide 
 		representations of the requested LDPR beyond those
-		necessary to conform to this specification, using standard HTTP content negotiation. 
+		necessary to conform to this specification, using standard HTTP content negotiation ([[!HTTP11]] Section 12 - Content Negotiation). 
 		If the client does not indicate a preference, <code>text/turtle</code> SHOULD be returned.
 	</div>
 	<div id="ldpr-4_3_5" class="rule">4.3.5 In the absence of special knowledge of the application or domain, LDPR
@@ -684,6 +685,11 @@
    foaf:name "Joan R. Smith".</pre>
 
 	<p>
+		The server determines the size of the pages using application specific methods not defined
+		within this specificiation. Note also, the actual name for the query parameter (such as ?p=2) is also
+		defined by the server and not this specification.
+	</p>
+	<p>
 		The following example is the result of retrieving the representation
 		for the next page:
 	</p>
@@ -745,8 +751,7 @@
 		by redirecting the client to the first page resource using a <code>303 See
 		Other</code> response with an HTTP <code>Location</code> header providing the first page resource URL.
 	</div>
-	<div id="ldpr-pagingGET-4" class="rule">4.10.2.4 LDPR servers that support paging MUST include in the page
-		representation a representation for the page resource.
+	<div id="ldpr-pagingGET-4" class="rule">4.10.2.4 LDPR servers that support paging MUST include a representation for the page resource.
 	</div>
 	<div id="ldpr-pagingGET-4_1" class="rule">4.10.2.4.1 The page resource representation MUST have one triple with the subject
 		of the page, predicate of <code>ldp:nextPage</code> and