AC rep comment #2 on clarity on types in examples
authorSteve Speicher <sspeiche@gmail.com>
Mon, 26 Jan 2015 11:51:28 -0500
changeset 938 859f98c26867
parent 937 ae4acedaf21b
child 958 2f25528e103a
AC rep comment #2 on clarity on types in examples
ldp.html
--- a/ldp.html	Mon Jan 26 10:55:18 2015 -0500
+++ b/ldp.html	Mon Jan 26 11:51:28 2015 -0500
@@ -1059,8 +1059,9 @@
 	<a title="Linked Data Platform Direct Container">LDP Direct Containers</a>
 	meet those kinds of needs.  Direct Containers allow membership triples to use a subject
 	other than the container itself as the consistent membership value, and/or to use
-	a  predicate from an application's domain model as the membership predicate. Let's
-	start with a pre-existing domain resource for a person's net worth, as illustrated below:</p>
+	a  predicate from an application's domain model as the membership predicate.</p>
+	<p>Let's start with a pre-existing domain resource for a person's net worth, as illustrated 
+	immediately below, and then see how a Container resource can be applied in subsequent examples:</p>
 			
 <em>Request</em> to <code>http://example.org/netWorth/nw1/</code>:
 <pre class="example" id="ldpc-ex-membership-partial-req">GET /netWorth/nw1/ HTTP/1.1
@@ -2526,6 +2527,7 @@
 <!-- <blockquote><em><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/PR-ldp-20141216/">Proposed Recommendation Draft</a></em></blockquote> -->
 <!-- 
 <ul>
+	<li>2015-01-26 - AC rep comment #2 on clarity on types in examples (SS)</li>
 	<li>2015-01-26 - AC rep comment #1 on clarity in security considerations (SS)</li>
 	<li>2015-01-26 - Align usage of Link: rel= to not use single quotes per RFC5988 (SS)</li>
 </ul>