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<title>Linked Data Platform 1.0</title>
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<code>return=representation</code> preference [[!Prefer]], used optionally by clients to
supply a hint to help the server form a response that is most appropriate to
the client's needs. The LDP-defined parameters suggest the portion(s) of a resource's state that the
- client application is interested in, and if received is likely to be
+ client application is interested in and, if received, is likely to be
processed. LDP Containers with large numbers of associated documents
and/or members will have large representations, and many client
applications may be interested in processing only a subset of the LDPC's
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<code>omit-parameter = "omit" *WSP "=" *WSP ldp-uri-list</code>
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Where <code>WSP</code> is whitespace [[!RFC4234]], and
- <code>ldp-uri-list</code> is re-uses the definition from <a href="#">include</a>.
+ <code>ldp-uri-list</code> is a blank-delimited unordered set of URIs whose ABNF is given below.
The generic preference BNF [[!Prefer]] allows either a quoted string or a token as the value of a
preference parameter; LDP assigns a meaning to the value only when it is a quoted string of
- the form in the ABNF.
+ the form:
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