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<body>
<section id='abstract'>
A set of best practices and simple approach for a read-write Linked Data architecture, based on
-HTTP access to web resources that describe their state using <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr>.
+HTTP access to web resources that describe their state using the <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr>
+data model.
</section>
<section>
@@ -741,7 +742,7 @@
Alternatively, a server may recognize that a container that has been
requested is too big to return in a single message.</p>
<p>
- To address this problem, LDPCs may support a technique called Paging. Paging can be achieved with a
+ To address this problem, LDPCs should support a technique called Paging. Paging can be achieved with a
simple RDF pattern. For each container resource, <code><containerURL></code>, we define a new
resource <code><containerURL>?firstPage</code>.
The triples in the representation of <code><containerURL>?firstPage</code>
@@ -1214,6 +1215,7 @@
<h1>Change History</h1>
<blockquote><em>First Public Working Draft</em></blockquote>
<ul>
+ <li>2013-03-04 - Comments received from David Woods: abstract, paging informative (part 1) (SS)</li>
<li>2013-03-04 - ISSUE-36 - Added informative text regarding creationg of containers in 5.4.4 (SS)</li>
<li>2013-03-04 - ISSUE-12 - Added section 4.7.3 not to allow PATCH for create (SS)</li>
<li>2013-03-03 - Adjustments to language about different container behavior (SS)</li>
@@ -1291,6 +1293,10 @@
</li>
<li>5.4.5: in light of the existence of server-managed properties, why not allow response body from create?
</li>
+ <li>Per David Woods, 'Sections 4.4.1, 4.5.1, 4.7.1, 5.4.1, 5.6.1 and 5.8.1 all relate to
+ allowable write operations. I suggest adding the statement, "An LDPR server
+ MAY require a user to be authenticated and authorized before this action is
+ permitted." to each of those sections.', consider place to edit this in.</li>
</ul>
<div class="ldp-issue">
<div class="ldp-issue-title"><a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/track/issues/37">ISSUE-37</a></div>