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-To foster the development of the Linked Data Platform specification, this document includes a set of user stories, use cases, scenarios and requirements that motivate a simple
-read-write Linked Data architecture, based on HTTP access to web
-resources that describe their state using RDF.
+<p>
+To foster the development of the Linked Data Platform specification, this document includes a set of user stories, use cases, scenarios and requirements that motivate a simple read-write Linked Data architecture, based on HTTP access to web resources that describe their state using RDF.
+ The starting point for the development of these use-cases is a collection of user-stories that provide realistic examples that describe how people may use read-write Linked Data. The use-cases themselves are captured in a narrative style that describes a
+ behavior, or set of behaviors based on, and using scenarios from, these user-stories. The aim throughout has been to avoid details of protocol (specifically
+ the HTTP protocol), and use of any specific vocabulary that might be introduced by the
+ <abbr title="Linked Data Platform">LDP</abbr> specification.
+</p>
+
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<h1 id="org">Organization of this Document</h1>
-
-<p>
- Use-cases are captured in a narrative style that describes a
- behavior, or set of behaviors drawn from user-stories. They are embellished with concrete examples drawn
- from representative user-stories. The aim throughout has been to avoid details of protocol (specifically
- the HTTP protocol), and use of any specific vocabulary that might be introduced by the
- <abbr title="Linked Data Platform">LDP</abbr> specification.
-</p>
<p>This document is organized as follows:</p>
<ul>
<li><b><a href="#userstories" title="User Stories">User Stories</a></b>