--- a/ldp.html Fri May 17 14:19:23 2013 -0400
+++ b/ldp.html Fri May 17 14:34:55 2013 -0400
@@ -170,11 +170,11 @@
<dd>As defined by Tim Berners-Lee [[LINKED-DATA]].<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Resource</dfn> (<dfn><abbr title="Linked Data Platform Resource">LDPR</abbr></dfn>)</dt>
- <dd>HTTP resource that conforms to the simple lifecycle
+ <dd>HTTP resource whose state is represented in RDF that conforms to the simple lifecycle
patterns and conventions in the <a href="#ldpr">LDPRs</a> section.<p></p></dd>
<dt><dfn>Linked Data Platform Container</dfn> (<dfn><abbr title="Linked Data Platform Container">LDPC</abbr></dfn>)</dt>
- <dd>An LDPR representing a collection of same-subject, same-predicate triples, which are uniquely identified by a URI
+ <dd>An LDPR representing a collection of same-subject, same-predicate triples which is uniquely identified by a URI
that responds to client requests for creation, modification, and enumeration of its members.
<p></p></dd>
@@ -1274,7 +1274,8 @@
</p>
<blockquote><em><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-ldp-20130307/">Second Public Working Draft</a></em></blockquote>
<ul>
- <li>2013-05-15 - ISSUE-9 Moved section 4.1.7 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Servers_should_serve_up_canonical_URLs">deployment guide</a> (SS)</li>
+ <li>2013-05-17 - Tweaks to Terminology section for LDPR and LDPC (SS)</li>
+ <li>2013-05-17 - ISSUE-9 Moved section 4.1.7 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Servers_should_serve_up_canonical_URLs">deployment guide</a> (SS)</li>
<li>2013-05-15 - Updated wording for 5.2.2 from to be more clear (SS)</li>
<li>2013-05-13 - ISSUE-49 Moved section 4.1.4 out of spec to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Deployment_Guide#Predicate_URIs_SHOULD_be_HTTP_URLs">deployment guide</a>. (SS)</li>
<li>2013-05-08 - Removed closed issues 5, 7, 55 and 38 as the don't require edits. Added 64 and 65. (SS)</li>