changeset 471 5aabdca8ea7b
parent 470 eb040e50a66f
child 472 00f0d6677c0c
--- a/ldp.html	Fri Feb 07 19:23:17 2014 -0500
+++ b/ldp.html	Sat Feb 08 02:04:35 2014 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
 <!DOCTYPE html>
  Editor TODO:
@@ -24,7 +25,7 @@
     <title>Linked Data Platform 1.0</title>
-    <!-- Changed by: , 05-Feb-2014 -->
+    <!-- Changed by: , 07-Feb-2014 -->
     <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8'/>
       === NOTA BENE ===
@@ -2233,7 +2234,7 @@
 	<code>return=representation</code> preference [[!Prefer]], used optionally by clients to 
 	supply a hint to help the server form a response that is most appropriate to 
 	the client's needs.  The LDP-defined parameters suggest the portion(s) of a resource's state that the 
-	client application is interested in, and if received is likely to be 
+	client application is interested in and, if received, is likely to be 
 	processed.  LDP Containers with large numbers of associated documents 
 	and/or members will have large representations, and many client 
 	applications may be interested in processing only a subset of the LDPC's 
@@ -2281,10 +2282,10 @@
 		<code>omit-parameter = "omit" *WSP "=" *WSP ldp-uri-list</code>
 		Where <code>WSP</code> is whitespace [[!RFC4234]], and
-		<code>ldp-uri-list</code> is re-uses the definition from <a href="#">include</a>.
+		<code>ldp-uri-list</code> is a blank-delimited unordered set of URIs whose ABNF is given below.
 		The generic preference BNF [[!Prefer]] allows either a quoted string or a token as the value of a 
 		preference parameter; LDP assigns a meaning to the value only when it is a quoted string of
-		the form in the ABNF.
+		the form: