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 <h2>Model the Data</h2>
 
 <p class="note">
-It is not within scope of this document to treat Linked Open Data modeling comprehensively however, we highlight how Linked Data  differs from the traditional relational data modeling approach and describe who should be involved as guidance.
+It is not within scope of this document to treat Linked Open Data modeling comprehensively however, we highlight recommended participants in the modeling effort, some of the differences between Linked Data versus traditional relational data modeling and provision of basic metadata.
 </p>
 
 <h3>Participants in the Modeling Process</h3>