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+++ b/people/index.html	Sat Jan 28 15:35:35 2012 +0000
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 
 <section id="abstract">
 <p>
-This document defines a set of terms for describing people. It defines how to describe people's characteristics such as names and how to relate people to other things, such as organisations or projects. For each term, guidance on the usage along with examples is provided. This document also defines mappings to widely used vocabularies to enable interoperability.
+This document defines a set of terms for describing people. It defines how to describe people's characteristics such as names or addresses and how to relate people to other things, for example to organizations or projects. For each term, guidance on the usage within a running example is provided. This document also defines mappings to widely used vocabularies to enable interoperability.
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@@ -37,6 +37,7 @@
 <h2 id="characteristics">People's characteristics</h2>
 <p>@@TODO: describe a person's fundamental characteristics (ISA <a href="http://joinup.ec.europa.eu/asset/core_person/description">Core Person Vocabulary</a>) and contact information (<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/vcard-rdf/" title="Representing vCard Objects in RDF">vCard</a>).</p>
 <p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/17">ISSUE-17</a></p>
+<p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/22">ISSUE-22</a></p>
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