Update for 9 November draft, to be proposed to AC
Wed, 09 Nov 2016 16:06:34 +0100
changeset 211 4fbf9111cd3a
parent 210 ffb03322e753
child 212 bc5077143d92
Update for 9 November draft, to be proposed to AC
--- a/cover.html	Wed Oct 26 20:11:28 2016 +0200
+++ b/cover.html	Wed Nov 09 16:06:34 2016 +0100
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
     <div class="head"><a href="https://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" src="https://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" height="48" width="72"></a>
       <h1>W3C Editor's Draft Process Document</h1>
-      <h2 class="notoc">15 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
+      <h2 class="notoc">9 November 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
         <dt>Latest Editor's version:</dt>
          <dd><a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html</a></dd>
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
       based on the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process Document</a>, which is the
       currently operative W3C Process.</p>
-    <p>This draft is proposed to the W3C Advisory Board, for approval to request formal Advisory Committee review on whether
+    <p>This draft is proposed to the W3C Advisory Committee, for approval to request formal Advisory Committee review on whether
       to adopt this as the new operative Process document.</p>
     <p>Further revision is expected to take place in a new version of the Process as required.</p>
@@ -829,7 +829,8 @@
       <p>Advisory Committee representatives who nominate individuals from their organization for participation in W3C activities
         are responsible for assessing and attesting to the qualities of those nominees.</p>
-      <p>See also the participation requirements described in
+      <p>See also the <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/cepc/">W3C Code of Ethics and Professional Conduct</a> 
+       [<a href="#ref-cepc">PUB38</a>] and the participation requirements described in
         <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy#sec-Disclosure">section 6</a> of the
         <a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy">W3C Patent Policy</a> [<a href="#ref-patentpolicy">PUB33</a>].</p>
@@ -2472,7 +2473,7 @@
       <p>W3C <em class="rfc2119">must</em> publish an Obsolete or Rescinded Recommendation with up to date status.
         The updated version <em class="rfc2119">may</em> remove the main body of the document. The Status of this Document section
-        <em class="rfc2119">should</em> link to an explanation of the Obsolete or Rescinded status as appropriate.</p>
+        <em class="rfc2119">should</em> link to the explanation of <a href="https://www.w3.org/2016/11/obsoleting-rescinding/">Obsoleting and Rescinding W3C Specifications</a> [<a href="#ref-obs-resc">PUB39</a>] as appropriate.</p>
       <p>Once W3C has published a Rescinded Recommendation, future W3C technical reports
         <em class="rfc2119">must not</em> include normative references to that technical report.</p>
@@ -2918,6 +2919,9 @@
          <dd><cite><a href="https://www.w3.org/Guide/">The Art of Consensus</a></cite>, a guidebook for W3C Working Group Chairs and other collaborators</dd>
         <dt id="ref-cepc">[PUB38]</dt>
          <dd><cite><a href="https://www.w3.org/Consortium/cepc/">W3C Code of Ethics and Professional Conduct</a></cite></dd>
+        <dt id="ref-obs-resc">[PUB39]</dt>
+         <dd><cite><a href="https://www.w3.org/2016/11/obsoleting-rescinding/">Obsoleting and Rescinding W3C Specifications</a></cite></dd>
       <h3>12.2 <a id="member-refs">Member-only Resources</a></h3>
@@ -2965,7 +2969,7 @@
         Tantek Çelik (Mozilla), Michael Champion (Microsoft), Maria Courtemanche (IBM), Donald Deutsch (Oracle),
         Geoffrey Creighton (Microsoft), Kevin Fleming (Bloomberg), Virginia Fournier (Apple), Virginie Galindo (Gemalto),
         Daniel Glazman (Disruptive Innovations), Michael Geldblum (Oracle), Ian Jacobs (W3C), Jeff Jaffe (W3C),
-        Jay Junichi Kishigami (NTT),
+        Jay Kishigami 岸上順一 (NTT),
         Mark Nottingham, Peter Patel-Schneider, Scott Peterson (Google), Delfí Ramírez, Florian Rivoal, Wendy Seltzer (W3C),
         David Singer (Apple), Geoffrey Snedden, Josh Soref, Ralph Swick (W3C), 
         Léonie Watson (The Paciello Group), Ben Wilson, Chris Wilson (Google), Rigo Wenning (W3C), Helene Workman (Apple),
@@ -2999,6 +3003,7 @@
+        <li>Added link to document explaining Obsolete and Rescinded Recommendations - section <a href="#rec-rescind">6.9</a></li>
         <li>Allow Edited Recommendations to incorporate editorial changes without Advisory Committee review 
           - <a href="#revised-rec">Section 6.7.2</a></li>
         <li>Replace diagrams of Recommendation track with new versions to improve accessibility and accuracy