(disputed editorial?) change to language about who can represent a member consortium
authorcharles
Sat, 15 Oct 2016 10:39:54 +0200
changeset 207 421417f9c1cb
parent 206 1a277c50c1b6
child 208 713bdf6700ea
(disputed editorial?) change to language about who can represent a member consortium
cover.html
--- a/cover.html	Tue Oct 11 12:36:22 2016 +0200
+++ b/cover.html	Sat Oct 15 10:39:54 2016 +0200
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   <body>
     <div class="head"><a href="https://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" src="https://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" height="48" width="72"></a>
       <h1>W3C Editor's Draft Process Document</h1>
-      <h2 class="notoc">11 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
+      <h2 class="notoc">15 October 2016 Editor's Draft</h2>
       <dl>
         <dt>Latest Editor's version:</dt>
          <dd><a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html">https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/cover.html</a></dd>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 
     <p>This document is developed by the Advisory Board's Process Task Force working within the
       <a href="https://www.w3.org/community/w3process/">Revising W3C Process Community Group</a> (which anyone can join).
-      This is the 11 October 2016 Editor's draft for the proposed next version of the W3C Process Document. This document is
+      This is the 15 October 2016 Editor's draft for the proposed next version of the W3C Process Document. This document is
       based on the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2015/Process-20150901/">1 September 2015 Process Document</a>, which is the
       currently operative W3C Process.</p>
 
@@ -451,8 +451,7 @@
         W3C. A joint-stock corporation or similar entity is not a "Member Consortium" merely because it has shareholders or
         stockholders.  If it is not clear whether a prospective Member qualifies as a Member Consortium, the Director may
         reasonably make the determination. For a Member Consortium, the rights and privileges of W3C Membership described in the
-        W3C Process Document extend to the Member Consortium's officers and staff, including their 
-        Advisory Committee representative.</p>
+        W3C Process Document extend to the Member Consortium's paid staff and Advisory Committee representative.</p>
 
       <p>Member Consortia <em class="rfc2119">may</em> also designate up to four (or more at the Team's discretion) individuals
         who, though not employed by the organization, <em class="rfc2119">may</em> exercise the rights of