more editorials
authorGiuseppe Pascale <giuseppep@opera.com>
Tue, 22 Nov 2011 17:14:37 +0100
changeset 5 3edb4d51afad
parent 4 e2125d0424fa
child 6 d20b54eb88bc
more editorials
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--- a/hnreq/hnreq.html	Tue Nov 22 16:53:35 2011 +0100
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@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
 
         <section>
           <h4>Service Discovery</h4>
-          <p><a>Conforming specifications</a> SHOULD provide a means for applications to discover devices and applications in the home network which advertise services. Details of the advertising protocols are out of scope for this document and the type and number of supported discovery protocols is user agent dependent. Nevertheless <a>conforming specifications</a> SHOULD provide a means for application search for specific services and to be able to determine the means by which it should communicate with that service.</p>
+          <p><a>Conforming specifications</a> SHOULD provide a means for applications to discover services advertised by devices and applications in the home network. Details of the advertising protocols are out of scope for this document and the type and number of supported discovery protocols is user agent dependent. Nevertheless <a>conforming specifications</a> SHOULD provide a means for application search for specific services and to be able to determine the means by which it should communicate with that service.</p>
         </section>
 
         <section>
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
 
         <section>
           <h4>Control of Content Players</h4>
-          <p><a>Conforming specifications</a> SHOULD enable applications to know what content that can be presented by a device or service on the home network and control the playback of that content presented, in such a way that the application does not have to handle:</p>
+          <p><a>Conforming specifications</a> SHOULD enable applications to know what content can be presented by a device or service on the home network and control the playback of that content presented, in such a way that the application does not have to handle:</p>
           <ul>
             <li>issues of codec, container format, or transport protocol compatibility</li>
             <li>differences in the mechanisms by which content is delivered to the rendering device (e.g. received from broadcast vs. streamed from a media server)</li>