wording and capitalization tweaks
authordanbri <danbri@google.com>
Thu, 27 Jun 2013 15:13:09 +0200
changeset 96 6982920dac5f
parent 95 c054d90356a4
child 97 a78242a00f48
wording and capitalization tweaks
schema.org/ext/Actions2013-base.html
--- a/schema.org/ext/Actions2013-base.html	Thu Jun 27 15:10:47 2013 +0200
+++ b/schema.org/ext/Actions2013-base.html	Thu Jun 27 15:13:09 2013 +0200
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/Thing">Thing</a>
 
 </td>
-<td property="rdfs:comment">Whoever/whatever performed the action.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">The entity that performed the Action.</td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr typeof="rdf:Property" resource="http://schema.org/performedWith">
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/Thing">Thing</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">People or tools that participated in performing the action which are not the primary performer specified by performedBy.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">People or tools that participated in performing the Action which are not the primary performer specified by performedBy.</td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr typeof="rdf:Property" resource="http://schema.org/object">
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/Thing">Thing</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">The main item directly affected by the Action. The precise meaning of the property is dependent on the action sub-type.  Sub-actions may introduced more specific object properties that are rdfs:subPropertyOf object.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">The main item directly affected by the Action. The precise meaning of the property is dependent on the Action sub-type.  Sub-actions may introduced more specific object properties that are rdfs:subPropertyOf object.</td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr typeof="rdf:Property" resource="http://schema.org/target">
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/Thing">Thing</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">The target item of the action. The precise meaning of the property is dependent on the action sub-type. Will often be the things whose relation to the action is described with the English propositions "to", "in", "with" or "for". Sub-actions may introduce more specific target properties that are rdfs:subPropertyOf target.
+<td property="rdfs:comment">The target item of the Action. The precise meaning of the property is dependent on the Action sub-type. Will often be the things whose relation to the action is described with the English propositions "to", "in", "with" or "for". Specific kinds of Action may introduce more specific target properties that are rdfs:subPropertyOf the 'target' property.
 </td>
 
 </tr>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/Thing">Thing</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">Item that is the result of the performed action.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">Item that is the result of the performed Action.</td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr typeof="rdf:Property" resource="http://schema.org/startTime">
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/DateTime">DateTime</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">When the action was performed: start time. This is for actions that span a period of time.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">When the Action was performed: start time. This is for actions that span a period of time.</td>
 
 </tr>
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/DateTime">DateTime</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">When the action was performed: end time. This is for actions that span a period of time.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">When the Action was performed: end time. This is for actions that span a period of time.</td>
 
 </tr>
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/DateTime">DateTime</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">When the action information was created. It might be different from the action's start or end time if the action's information was reported at a different time.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">When the Action information was created. It might be different from the action's start or end time if the action's information was reported at a different time.</td>
 
 </tr>
 
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
 <a property="http://schema.org/range" href="http://schema.org/DateTime">DateTime</a>
 </td>
 
-<td property="rdfs:comment">When the action information was last updated.</td>
+<td property="rdfs:comment">When the Action information was last updated.</td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr typeof="rdf:Property" resource="http://schema.org/location">