Merge pull request #29 from w3c/wseltzer-patch-3
authorianbjacobs <ij@w3.org>
Sat, 18 Jul 2015 14:45:47 -0500
changeset 875 ec4109dd7188
parent 873 6d14cf28cb60 (current diff)
parent 874 5791bfd1aca7 (diff)
child 876 46b27922ebab
Merge pull request #29 from w3c/wseltzer-patch-3

editorial: disambiguate a "this"
latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html
--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Sat Jul 18 14:37:57 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Sat Jul 18 14:45:47 2015 -0500
@@ -343,8 +343,8 @@
             </li>
             <li>
                 <strong>Web Payment Completion</strong>: The payee passes a payment completion request to a payer wallet
-                service which returns the details of the payment completion response. If this was a payer-initiated
-                payment, this is the trigger for the wallet service to execute the payment otherwise this is a message
+                service which returns the details of the payment completion response. If the payment was payer-initiated,
+                this is the trigger for the wallet service to execute the payment; otherwise this is a message
                 advising of the result of a payee initiated payment.
             </li>
         </ul>