Fix long lines, change active copy back to ED.
authorManu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Sat, 18 Apr 2015 17:34:58 -0400
changeset 352 a5195f91df00
parent 351 25c1f39f6649
child 353 6de251e510c8
Fix long lines, change active copy back to ED.
latest/use-cases/index.html
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Fri Apr 17 08:21:46 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Sat Apr 18 17:34:58 2015 -0400
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
     <script class='remove'>
       var respecConfig = {
           // specification status (e.g. WD, LCWD, NOTE, etc.). If in doubt use ED.
-          specStatus:           "FPWD",
+          specStatus:           "ED",
 
           // the specification's short name, as in http://www.w3.org/TR/short-name/
           shortName:            "web-payments-use-cases",
 
           // if you wish the publication date to be other than today, set this
-          publishDate:  "2015-04-16",
+          //publishDate:  "2015-04-16",
 
           // if there is a previously published draft, uncomment this and set its YYYY-MM-DD date
           // and its maturity status
@@ -498,7 +498,9 @@
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h3>
       <p>
-In the second phase of the payment process, <a>payer</a> and <a>payee</a> determine which <a title="payment instrument">payment instruments</a> the
+In the second phase of the payment process, <a>payer</a> and 
+<a>payee</a> determine which 
+<a title="payment instrument">payment instruments</a> the
 <a>payer</a> will use to transfer funds to the <a>payee</a>.
       </p>
 
@@ -611,7 +613,8 @@
 General feedback is requested as to whether or not this section is helpful in
 grounding the payment phases and steps in a real world use case is helpful this
 early in the document. An alternative would be removing this section
-entirely if the preceding section suffices, or moving this narrative to section 7 with other examples.
+entirely if the preceding section suffices, or moving this narrative to 
+section 7 with other examples.
     </p>
 
     <section>
@@ -655,7 +658,9 @@
         </li>
 
         <li>
-<strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Jill pushes the "Pay Now to Party!" button and is presented with a number of options to pay, including her
+<strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Jill pushes the 
+"Pay Now to Party!" button and is presented with a number of options 
+to pay, including her
 credit card, her PayToParty loyalty card (which is highlighted to remind her
 of the discount), and a PayPal account. There is also a gift card from
 PayToParty that she received for her birthday, but she chooses not to
@@ -814,8 +819,10 @@
 success of this work.
           </dd>
           <dt>Privacy</dt>
-          <dd>Cory should exercise control over how much he wants the merchant
-	    to be able to track his activities. Programs like loyalty cards will likely involve agreement to more data with the merchant.
+          <dd>
+Cory should exercise control over how much he wants the merchant
+to be able to track his activities. Programs like loyalty cards will 
+likely involve agreement to more data with the merchant.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -876,8 +883,9 @@
             </dd>
             <dt>Motivation</dt>
             <dd>
-	      Unifying how people initiate payments from
-email, at a Point of Sale, and via a Web site will help ensure the ubiquity of the Web payment technology platform.
+Unifying how people initiate payments from email, at a Point of Sale, 
+and via a Web site will help ensure the ubiquity of the Web payment 
+technology platform.
             </dd>
             <dt>Privacy / Security</dt>
             <dd>
@@ -930,11 +938,14 @@
 delivered.
             </dd>
             <dt>Privacy</dt>
-            <dd>Due to the sensitivity of location data, individuals
-	      should be able to make small fuel <a title="purchase">purchases</a> in a way that respects their privacy.
+            <dd>
+Due to the sensitivity of location data, individuals should be able to make 
+small fuel <a title="purchase">purchases</a> in a way that respects their privacy.
             </dd>
             <dt>Security</dt>
-            <dd>Automated <a title="purchase">purchases</a> (e.g,. by a vehicle) should involve increased security (e.g., a second factor of authentication).
+            <dd>
+Automated <a title="purchase">purchases</a> (e.g,. by a vehicle) should involve 
+increased security (e.g., a second factor of authentication).
             </dd>
           </dl>
 
@@ -1004,7 +1015,8 @@
           <dl class="dl-horizontal">
             <dt>In-vehicle</dt>
             <dd>
-Jeff listens to a lot of music on the way to work. The music station serves a digital offer along with the music stream. This enables Jeff to
+Jeff listens to a lot of music on the way to work. The music station 
+serves a digital offer along with the music stream. This enables Jeff to
 easily buy music that he really likes.
             </dd>
             <dt>Goals</dt>
@@ -1052,7 +1064,8 @@
               </li>
                 <li>
 BoomCo will only ship industrial explosives to a business that can
-provide evidence of construction permits, a contractor's license, and an explosives handling license.
+provide evidence of construction permits, a contractor's license, and 
+an explosives handling license.
               </li>
                 <li>
 HomeLoanCo will not finalize a quote for a home mortgage without
@@ -1106,7 +1119,9 @@
 to complete the <a>transaction</a>.
           </dd>
           <dt>Privacy</dt>
-          <dd>Non-essential, personally identifiable data should be anonymized and protected throughout the process.
+          <dd>
+Non-essential, personally identifiable data should be anonymized and 
+protected throughout the process.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1359,8 +1374,10 @@
 and rapid, widespread adoption.
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
-          <dd>We have a goal for the Web payment architecture
-	    to support existing ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without changes to how they operate.
+          <dd>
+We have a goal for the Web payment architecture to support existing 
+ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without 
+changes to how they operate.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1471,7 +1488,9 @@
 
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
           <dt>Automatic Selection</dt>
-          <dd>When a <a title="payer">payer's</a> personal preferences are known, it becomes possible to make selections for them automatically.
+          <dd>
+When a <a title="payer">payer's</a> personal preferences are known, it 
+becomes possible to make selections for them automatically.
 
             <ul>
                 <li>
@@ -1481,7 +1500,8 @@
               </li>
                 <li>
 PayCo wants Elizabeth to know that if she pays with the debit card preferred
-by PayCo (because of a lower <a>transaction</a> fee for PayCo), she will benefit from a discount.
+by PayCo (because of a lower <a>transaction</a> fee for PayCo), 
+she will benefit from a discount.
               </li>
                 <li>
 Whenever Mary shops at BigFreshGrocery she uses the same credit card.
@@ -1490,7 +1510,8 @@
 from BigFreshGrocery.
               </li>
                 <li>
-Lalana does not like to scroll. She wants the instruments she uses most often to appear at top of the displayed list of available payment instruments.
+Lalana does not like to scroll. She wants the instruments she uses most 
+often to appear at top of the displayed list of available payment instruments.
               </li>
             </ul>
           </dd>
@@ -1505,7 +1526,8 @@
 and rapid, widespread adoption.
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
-          <dd>Payment solutions providers can make payments easier and faster through automation.
+          <dd>
+Payment solutions providers can make payments easier and faster through automation.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1556,7 +1578,9 @@
 
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
           <dt>Multi-Factor</dt>
-          <dd>We anticipate a range of authentication scenarios, leveraging a wide variety of approaches and device capabilities:
+          <dd>
+We anticipate a range of authentication scenarios, leveraging a wide variety 
+of approaches and device capabilities:
             <ul>
                 <li>
 When Ian selects his debit card, he is prompted for a PIN.
@@ -1849,7 +1873,9 @@
 
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
           <dt>Proofs</dt>
-          <dd>Goods and services may be released at different times depending on the type of <a>transaction</a> being performed:
+          <dd>
+Goods and services may be released at different times depending on the type of
+<a>transaction</a> being performed:
             <ul>
                 <li>
 Zhang Wei orders 10 large boxes of envelopes from an online shop in