Move p to ul for steps.
authorIan Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
Tue, 31 Mar 2015 22:45:24 -0500
changeset 678 9d9015fd61e2
parent 677 0a5f1152513b
child 679 7a00a8980cdf
Move p to ul for steps.

- consistent with 3
- more indent for readability
- Said “To be completed” in empty subsections
- Also collapsed busy subsections into ul in appendix A
latest/use-cases/index.html
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 31 14:48:06 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 31 22:45:24 2015 -0500
@@ -596,8 +596,8 @@
 
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of <a>purchase</a> Terms</h3>
-
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>: Jill begins her <a>purchase</a> at
 home on her laptop, where she browses the items on the PayToParty Web
 site. On the way to work the next morning, she explores the catalog
@@ -607,89 +607,93 @@
 PayToParty store near her office. She spots a few more items that
 she thinks she'd like to <a>purchase</a>, but decides to wait until later to
 make the <a>purchase</a>.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: That same evening at home,
 Jill logs into her account on the PayToParty Web site, adding her
 preferred items to her shopping cart. The total price appears on the
 page.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Application of Marketing Elements</strong>: As Jill prepares to
 check out, PayToParty offers her a discount of 10% if she uses the store's
 loyalty card to pay.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h3>
-
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Accepted Schemes</strong>: Given where Jill lives,
 PayToParty offers her payment by credit card, debit card, the PayToParty
 loyalty card, and PayPal, but not Jill's favorite cryptocurrency (which she
 uses on other sites).
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Jill pushes the "Pay Now to Party!" button and is presented with a number of options to pay, including her
 credit card, her PayToParty loyalty card (which is highlighted to remind her
 of the discount), and a PayPal account. There is also a gift card from
 PayToParty that she received for her birthday, but she chooses not to
 use it for this <a>purchase</a>.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Authentication to Access Instruments</strong>: Jill selects
 the PayToParty loyalty card, which she enabled with theft-protection,
 and is asked to input a code that is sent to her phone before the
 <a>purchase</a> can be completed.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Payment Processing</h3>
-
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Initiation of Processing</strong>. PayToParty receives a
 message from Jill's device authorizing the payment. PayToParty
 submits the message to their <a>payment processor</a>, requesting a
 proof of hold for the funds.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Verification of Available Funds</strong>. PayToParty
 receives a proof of hold on Jill's funds for the <a>purchase</a> price of
 the goods. The PayToParty night-shift employees begin packing her purchased
 items for delivery the next day.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Authorization of Transfer</strong>. Once Jill's package is ready to
 go, PayToParty exchanges the proof of hold for a proof of payment by
 re-submitting the request to the payment network. They receive a proof of
 payment from the <a>payment processor</a>.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Completion of Transfer</strong>. Since Jill's PayToParty loyalty card
 operates as a credit card, the PayToParty site is immediately credited with
 the <a>purchase</a> amount and the funds will be swept into their bank account
 at the end of the week.
-        </p>
+        </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Delivery of Product/Receipt and Reversals</h3>
-
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Receipt</strong>. Jill's cloud-based wallet
 receives a detailed line-item digital receipt for the <a>purchase</a>.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Product</strong>. Jill's package goes out by courier the
 next morning and is on her doorstep before she leaves for work.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
   </section>
 
@@ -1649,7 +1653,7 @@
 of reversing, checking, or confirming their choice or submission. It should
 also be noted that this does not preclude certain <a>transaction</a> operations
 from being automated once they have been authorized by an <a>entity</a>.
-</a>For more details, see the section on
+For more details, see the section on
 <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-WCAG20-20081211/#minimize-error-reversible">Error Prevention (Legal, Financial, Data)</a>
 in [[WCAG20]].
         </p>
@@ -2098,8 +2102,7 @@
 
     <section>
       <h3>Credit Card Purchase</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
+      <p><em>To be completed</em>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -2112,86 +2115,88 @@
 fingerprint instead of a password to authorize the payment.
       </p>
 
-      <h3>Negotiation of <a>purchase</a> Terms</h3>
-
-      <p>
+      <h4>Negotiation of <a>Purchase</a> Terms</h4>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>: Anna searches for a flight on
 the booking website. She finds a flight for the ideal price and time.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Anna selects the flight and agrees to the
 terms and service associated with the ticket.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Application of Marketing Elements</strong>: <em>Not applicable to
 this particular use case.</em>
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h3>
-
-      <p>
+      <h4>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h4>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Accepted Schemes</strong>: The booking website takes
 Alipay, Visa, MasterCard, and China UnionPay for payment.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Anna chooses Alipay for
 payment.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Authentication to Access Instruments</strong>: Anna logs in the Alipay
 with her account name and password. Anna is told that she will pay for the
 airline ticket with 600RMB and she confirms it. Anna uses her fingerprint to
 approve the payment.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Payment Processing</h3>
-
-      <p>
+      <h4>Payment Processing</h4>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Initiation of Processing</strong>: Anna's Alipay wallet initiates
 the <a>transaction</a>.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Verification of Available Funds</strong>: <em>Not applicable to
 this particular use case.</em>
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Authorization of Transfer</strong>: Alipay initiates the payment to
 the booking website based on Anna's prior fingerprint-based authorization.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Completion of Transfer</strong>: The booking website gets a message
 from Alipay that the transfer is complete.
-        </p>
+        </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Delivery of Product/Receipt and Reversals</h3>
-
-      <p>
+      <h4>Delivery of Product/Receipt and Reversals</h4>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Receipt</strong>: The booking website sees that Anna's
 airline ticket order has been paid and sends a receipt message to her
 digital wallet.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Product</strong>: The booking website sends an email to
 Anna with the flight information including the airline, flight number,
 departure time, and gate number.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Electronic Cheque Payment</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
+      <p><em>To be completed</em>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Credit Transfer / Direct Debit</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
+      <p><em>To be completed</em>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -2203,84 +2208,91 @@
 The socks are shipped to her home address.
       </p>
 
-      <h3>Negotiation of Purchase Terms</h3>
+      <h4>Negotiation of Purchase Terms</h4>
 
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>: Lenne searches for "warm socks,
 locally sourced" in her favorite search engine. A pair of Alpaca socks come up
 as the first hit as the Alpaca's are nearby where she lives and the online
 store (AlpacaToesCo) provides local delivery. She has a coupon in her
 digital wallet for the store, but forgot long ago that it is there.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Lenne goes to AlpacaToesCo and puts the
 socks in her online shopping cart and is shown the price. Lenne provides her
 shipping address to AlpacaToes.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Application of Marketing Elements</strong>: When Lenne puts the socks
 in her online shopping cart, she's reminded of the "buy one, get one free"
 coupon she has in her wallet. She adds another pair of socks and continues
 with the checkout process.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h3>
+      <h4>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h4>
 
-      <p>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Accepted Schemes</strong>: The website takes Visa,
 Ripple, and Bitcoin for payment.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Lenne has a Visa card
 as well as a local Ripple wallet and a cloud-based Bitcoin wallet. Lenne
 selects her cloud-based Bitcoin wallet.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Authentication to Access Instruments</strong>: Since the value of the
 payment is less than $50, Lenne isn't asked for her two-factor authentication
 device to approve the <a>purchase</a>.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Payment Processing</h3>
+      <h4>Payment Processing</h4>
+<ul>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Initiation of Processing</strong>: Lenne's cloud-based Bitcoin wallet
 provider initiates the <a>transaction</a>.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Verification of Available Funds</strong>: <em>Not applicable to
 this particular use case.</em>
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Authorization of Transfer</strong>: AlpacaToesCo is sent a message
 from the Bitcoin cloud wallet notifying them that the transfer has been
 initiated. Lenne is told that she will receive a notification when the
 item is shipped.
-        </p>
-        <p>
+        </li>
+        <li>
 <strong>Completion of Transfer</strong>: AlpacaToesCo gets a message from the
 Bitcoin cloud wallet that the transfer is complete. A Bitcoin
 <a>transaction</a> ID is included in the message so that AlpacaToesCo can
 release the product when the appropriate number of verifications are made on
 the <a>transaction</a>.
-        </p>
+        </li>
+</ul>
 
-      <h3>Delivery of Product/Receipt and Reversals</h3>
-
-      <p>
+      <h4>Delivery of Product/Receipt and Reversals</h4>
+<ul>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Receipt</strong>: AlpacaToesCo sees 6 verifications on the
 transaction in the Bitcoin blockchain and sends a receipt of sale to Lenne's
 cloud wallet. The store notifies Lenne that they have shipped her package.
-      </p>
+      </li>
 
-      <p>
+      <li>
 <strong>Delivery of Product</strong>: AlpacaToesCo ships the package of socks
 to Lenne and she receives them the next day.
-      </p>
+      </li>
+</ul>
     </section>
 
   </section>
@@ -2288,23 +2300,11 @@
   <section class="appendix">
     <h2>Future Work</h2>
 
-    <section>
-      <h3>Automatic Tax Payment</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
-    </section>
-
-    <section>
-      <h3>Person to Person Cash Payment</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
-    </section>
-
-    <section>
-      <h3>Government Entitlement Disbursement</h3>
-      <p>
-      </p>
-    </section>
+    <ul>
+      <li>Automatic Tax Payment</li>
+      <li>Person to Person Cash Payment</li>
+      <li>Government Entitlement Disbursement</li>
+    </ul>
 
   </section>