--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 24 13:01:09 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 24 18:44:35 2015 -0500
@@ -533,14 +533,14 @@
       <h3>Payment Processing</h3>
 
       <p>
-<strong>Initiation of Processing</strong>. The PayToParty website receives a
-message from Jill's device authorizing the payment. The PayToParty website
-takes that message and submits it to their payment processor, requesting a
+<strong>Initiation of Processing</strong>. PayToParty receives a
+message from Jill's device authorizing the payment. PayToParty 
+submits the message to their payment processor, requesting a
 proof of hold for the funds.
         </p>
 	      <p>
-<strong>Verification of Available Funds</strong>. The PayToParty website
-software receives a proof of hold on Jills fund's for the purchase price of
+<strong>Verification of Available Funds</strong>. PayToParty 
+receives a proof of hold on Jills fund's for the purchase price of
 the goods. The PayToParty night-shift employees begin packing her purchased
 items for delivery the next day.
         </p>
@@ -2008,15 +2008,10 @@
 
   <section>
     <h2 id="acks">Acknowledgements</h2>
-
-    <p>
-The editors are thankful to the following contributions from members of the
-Web Payments Interest Group, Web Payments Community Group,
-and the Web community at large (in alphabetical order):
+    <p>The editors wish to thank the participants of the 
+      <a href="http://www.w3.org/Payments/IG/">Web Payments Interest Group</a> for discussions about and contributions to this document, as well as the 
+<a href="https://www.w3.org/community/webpayments/">Web Payments Community Group</a> for earlier work that informed this document.
     </p>
-    <p>
-    </p>
-
   </section>
 
   </body>