--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html Thu May 14 09:55:03 2015 -0400
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@@ -501,8 +501,8 @@
<section>
<h3>Negotiation of Payment Instruments</h3>
<p>
-In the second phase of the payment process, <a>payer</a> and
-<a>payee</a> determine which
+In the second phase of the payment process, <a>payer</a> and
+<a>payee</a> determine which
<a title="payment instrument">payment instruments</a> the
<a>payer</a> will use to transfer funds to the <a>payee</a>.
</p>
@@ -613,9 +613,9 @@
</p>
<p class="issue">
-General feedback is requested on whether this section is helpful. We are
-attempting to ground the payment phases and steps in a real world use case.
-An alternative would be removing this section entirely if the preceding
+General feedback is requested on whether this section is helpful. We are
+attempting to ground the payment phases and steps in a real world use case.
+An alternative would be removing this section entirely if the preceding
section suffices, or moving this narrative to section 7 with the other examples.
</p>
@@ -643,7 +643,7 @@
<li>
<strong>Application of Marketing Elements</strong>: As Jill prepares to
-check out, PayToParty notifies her of a discount for 10% if she uses
+check out, PayToParty notifies her of a discount for 10% if she uses
the store's loyalty card to pay.
</li>
</ul>
@@ -660,8 +660,8 @@
</li>
<li>
-<strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Jill pushes the
-"Pay Now to Party!" button and is presented with a number of options
+<strong>Selection of Payment Instruments</strong>: Jill pushes the
+"Pay Now to Party!" button and is presented with a number of options
to pay, including her
credit card, her PayToParty loyalty card (which is highlighted to remind her
of the discount), and a PayPal account. There is also a gift card from
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@
<dt>Privacy</dt>
<dd>
Cory should exercise control over how much he wants the merchant
-to be able to track his activities. Programs like loyalty cards will
+to be able to track his activities. Programs like loyalty cards will
likely involve agreement to more data with the merchant.
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -885,8 +885,8 @@
</dd>
<dt>Motivation</dt>
<dd>
-Unifying how people initiate payments from email, at a Point of Sale,
-and via a Web site will help ensure the ubiquity of the Web payment
+Unifying how people initiate payments from email, at a Point of Sale,
+and via a Web site will help ensure the ubiquity of the Web payment
technology platform.
</dd>
<dt>Privacy / Security</dt>
@@ -942,12 +942,12 @@
</dd>
<dt>Privacy</dt>
<dd>
-Due to the sensitivity of location data, individuals should be able to make
+Due to the sensitivity of location data, individuals should be able to make
small fuel <a title="purchase">purchases</a> in a way that respects their privacy.
</dd>
<dt>Security</dt>
<dd>
-Automated <a title="purchase">purchases</a> (e.g,. by a vehicle) should involve
+Automated <a title="purchase">purchases</a> (e.g,. by a vehicle) should involve
increased security (e.g., a second factor of authentication).
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -1018,7 +1018,7 @@
<dl id="uc-vehicle" class="dl-horizontal">
<dt>In-vehicle</dt>
<dd>
-Jeff listens to a lot of music on the way to work. The music station
+Jeff listens to a lot of music on the way to work. The music station
serves a digital offer along with the music stream. This enables Jeff to
easily buy music that he really likes.
</dd>
@@ -1067,7 +1067,7 @@
</li>
<li>
BoomCo will only ship industrial explosives to a business that can
-provide evidence of construction permits, a contractor's license, and
+provide evidence of construction permits, a contractor's license, and
an explosives handling license.
</li>
<li>
@@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@
</dd>
<dt>Privacy</dt>
<dd>
-Non-essential, personally identifiable data should be anonymized and
+Non-essential, personally identifiable data should be anonymized and
protected throughout the process.
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -1378,8 +1378,8 @@
</dd>
<dt>Motivation</dt>
<dd>
-We have a goal for the Web payment architecture to support existing
-ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without
+We have a goal for the Web payment architecture to support existing
+ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without
changes to how they operate.
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -1492,7 +1492,7 @@
<dl id="uc-automatic-selection" class="dl-horizontal">
<dt>Automatic Selection</dt>
<dd>
-When a <a title="payer">payer's</a> personal preferences are known, it
+When a <a title="payer">payer's</a> personal preferences are known, it
becomes possible to make selections for them automatically.
<ul>
@@ -1503,7 +1503,7 @@
</li>
<li>
PayCo wants Elizabeth to know that if she pays with the debit card preferred
-by PayCo (because of a lower <a>transaction</a> fee for PayCo),
+by PayCo (because of a lower <a>transaction</a> fee for PayCo),
she will benefit from a discount.
</li>
<li>
@@ -1513,7 +1513,7 @@
from BigFreshGrocery.
</li>
<li>
-Lalana does not like to scroll. She wants the instruments she uses most
+Lalana does not like to scroll. She wants the instruments she uses most
often to appear at top of the displayed list of available payment instruments.
</li>
</ul>
@@ -1582,23 +1582,23 @@
<dl id="uc-multifactor" class="dl-horizontal">
<dt>Multi-Factor</dt>
<dd>
-We anticipate a range of authentication scenarios, leveraging a wide variety
+We anticipate a range of authentication scenarios, leveraging a wide variety
of approaches and device capabilities:
<ul>
- <li>
+ <li>
When Ian selects his debit card, he is prompted for a PIN.
</li>
- <li>
+ <li>
Wes has configured his debit card to require a fingerprint scan from his
mobile device and a Universal Two Factor (U2F) device to be used when
performing a <a>purchase</a> over $1,000.
</li>
- <li>
+ <li>
Frederic taps his phone at the grocery store to pay, and BankA sends him a
one-time password (OTP) on his mobile phone that he enters using a keypad at
the checkout counter.
</li>
- <li>
+ <li>
Nadia's bank asks her to use her two-factor authentication device and at
least one of their in-branch retinal scanners or palm-vein readers
before she is allowed to withdraw $25,000.