--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html Sun Jul 26 23:12:07 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html Mon Jul 27 09:53:45 2015 -0500
@@ -142,13 +142,10 @@
<p>To reduce this fragmentation, the Working Group will focus
primarily on standardization of a set of messages and a message flow
for the initiation, confirmation, and completion of a payment. The
- scope of the charter focuses on the interactions between
-<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2015/WD-web-payments-use-cases-20150416/#dfn-payment-scheme">payment schemes</a>
- and the user agent and Web application, as well as the
-external actors that will interface directly with them. This will
+ scope of the charter focuses on the interactions
+ between payer user agent and payee Web application. This will
increase interoperability between payer and payee systems (for
-existing and future payment schemes), and encourage greater automation
-of the steps in a typical payment.</p>
+existing and future <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2015/WD-web-payments-use-cases-20150416/#dfn-payment-scheme">payment schemes</a>), and encourage greater automation of the steps in a typical payment.</p>
<p>By focusing on the message format and flow, the group
leaves open the standardization of the delivery mechanism for these
@@ -300,7 +297,7 @@
<h3>Relation to Regulatory Requirements</h3>
- <p>Payment schemes manage their own regulatory obligations. The deliverables of this group should not prevent them from doing so.</p>
+ <p>Payment schemes define how various parties meet relevant regulatory obligations. The deliverables of this group should not prevent parties from meeting those obligations.</p>
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