Merge pull request #6 from dlongley/grammar-spelling-fixes
authorManu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Thu, 02 Apr 2015 16:39:30 -0400
changeset 688 6afaf257929e
parent 686 cf97dc8c54a2 (current diff)
parent 687 ca838d7a504f (diff)
child 689 c518edb24f18
Merge pull request #6 from dlongley/grammar-spelling-fixes

Fix some grammar/spelling issues.
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Thu Apr 02 01:43:07 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Thu Apr 02 16:39:30 2015 -0400
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@
           <dt>Store Credit</dt>
           <dd>
 When Rick arrives as the self-checkout kiosk,
-he scans five dress shirts and two new pair of slacks.
+he scans five dress shirts and two new pairs of slacks.
 The kiosk mentions that Rick could save 15% off of his <a>purchase</a>
 if he makes the <a>purchase</a> using store credit. He accepts the offer and
 a new store credit card is placed in his payment application on his mobile
@@ -1354,8 +1354,8 @@
 and rapid, widespread adoption.
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
-          <dd>We have as a goal that the Web payment architecture
-	    will support existing ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without changes to how they operate.
+          <dd>We have a goal for the Web payment architecture
+	    to support existing ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without changes to how they operate.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1391,7 +1391,7 @@
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
           <dt>Discovery</dt>
           <dd>
-Yanos has a multiple digital wallets; one on his mobile phone, two in the
+Yanos has a multiple digital wallets: one on his mobile phone, two in the
 cloud (but on different websites), and one on his smart watch. Each one has
 a credit card that he may want to use for a credit card-based <a>purchase</a>.
           </dd>
@@ -1564,7 +1564,7 @@
               </li>
                 <li>
 Frederic taps his phone at the grocery store to pay, and BankA sends him a
-one-time password (OTP) on his mobile phone that he enters in a keypad at
+one-time password (OTP) on his mobile phone that he enters using a keypad at
 the checkout counter.
               </li>
                 <li>
@@ -1592,7 +1592,7 @@
           <dt>Accessibility</dt>
           <dd>Not everyone can provide fingerprints or detailed iris scans.
 	    Therefore, it is important to offer multiple forms
-	    biometric verification to improev accessibility.
+	    biometric verification to improve accessibility.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1998,7 +1998,7 @@
           <dt>Virtual Goods</dt>
           <dd>
 When Lilith buys music from a band at MusicBox and then goes to their
-Web site to download additional content, no account is required, just a
+Web site to download additional content, no registration is required, just a
 proof of <a>purchase</a> that is sent to the band's website, after which
 MusicBox provides Lilith a link to download the additional content.
           </dd>
@@ -2101,7 +2101,7 @@
 manager approves. The overcharged funds are returned to his account.
               </li>
               <li>
-Teo claims that a blender that they purchased online was faulty and returns
+Teo claims that a blender they purchased online was faulty and returns
 the product to the merchant. The merchant provides the customer with a refund
 in the form of store credit based on the return policy.
               </li>
@@ -2161,18 +2161,18 @@
       <h3>Credit Card Payment (Visa, MasterCard)</h3>
       <p>
 This scenario outlines a typical card purchase using the 4 corner model.
-Janet is buying an Hermes bag online from a resale shop.
+Janet is buying an handbag online from a resale shop.
       </p>
 
       <h4>Negotiation of Purchase Terms</h4>
       <ul>
         <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>: Janet searches her favorite resale shop
-online to discover a gently used Hermes purse she has always wanted.
+online to discover a gently used purse that she has always wanted.
         </li>
 
         <li>
-<strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Janet selects the bag and puts it into
+<strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Janet selects the purse and puts it into
 the shopping cart before others have a chance to buy it. She agrees with the
 shipping terms and the amount of insurance paid for by the sender (seller).
         </li>
@@ -2189,7 +2189,7 @@
         <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Accepted Schemes</strong>: The site takes
 Discover/MasterCard/Visa/debit along with secured money order, Bitcoin,
-Google Wallet and ApplePay.
+Google Wallet, and ApplePay.
         </li>
 
         <li>