--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Sat Mar 28 23:52:26 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Sun Mar 29 00:03:33 2015 -0400
@@ -1008,7 +1008,7 @@
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
           <dd>
-There are certain types of purchases that cannot be initated without
+There are certain types of purchases that cannot be initiated without
 a proper set of credentials. While this isn't fundamental to the payment
 process, it is an integral part of some transaction processes.
           </dd>
@@ -1044,6 +1044,11 @@
 <tref>payer</tref> to divulge personal information that is not necessary
 to complete the transaction.
           </dd>
+          <dt>Privacy</dt>
+          <dd>
+It is important to ensure that non-essential personally identifiable data
+must anonymized and protected throughout the process.
+          </dd>
         </dl>
 
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
@@ -1148,7 +1153,7 @@
             </dd>
             <dt>Privacy / Security</dt>
             <dd>
-Phishing for personaly identifiable information becomes much easier if there
+Phishing for personally identifiable information becomes much easier if there
 are mechanisms that are put in place that enable that information to be
 easily and automatically transmitted over the Web.
             </dd>
@@ -1436,7 +1441,8 @@
           <dd>
 The types of payment instruments available to a <tref>payer</tref> could be
 used to digitally fingerprint a <tref>payer</tref> even if they were using an
-pseudo-anonymous payment mechanism.
+pseudo-anonymous payment mechanism. Merchants and payees may be legally
+obligated to protect this kind of payer payment information.
           </dd>
         </dl>
 
@@ -1745,11 +1751,11 @@
               </li>
               <li>
 To protect Tibor's privacy when he purchases candy online, the store asks only
-for Tibors verified shipping address and a proof of payment to send him
+for Tibor's verified shipping address and a proof of payment to send him
 the chocolates.
               </li>
               <li>
-RockinRadio, SmoothSounds, and classicallyClassic are independent specialised
+RockinRadio, SmoothSounds, and classicallyClassic are independent specialized
 music streaming services. They accept proof of purchase from each other to
 provide a track that is in their online streaming catalogue even if it was
 originally bought from another provider.
@@ -1807,8 +1813,8 @@
 15 minutes.
               </li>
               <li>
-Vanessa uses Ripple to purchase a new work outfit in USD and funds are made
-available within a few minutes to OnlineWorkClothes in EUR.
+Vanessa uses Ripple to purchase a new work outfit in US Dollars and funds are
+made available within a few minutes to OnlineWorkClothes in Euro.
               </li>
             </ul>
           </dd>
@@ -1962,7 +1968,7 @@
           <dd>
 Improved user experience,
 Innovation,
-Portability, and
+Portability, 
 and rapid, widespread adoption.
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>