--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Fri Jul 17 17:05:16 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Fri Jul 17 17:11:34 2015 -0500
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
         <p><strong>Note:</strong> The W3C <a href="/Payments/IG/">Web Payments Interest Group</a> expects to continue to explore a wider variety of eCommerce scenarios, including digital receipts; loyalty programs and coupons; peer-to-peer payments; and harmonization of user
             experience in-browser, in-app, and in-store. For more information, see the <a
                     href="/TR/web-payments-use-cases/">Payments Use Cases</a> published by the W3C Web
-            Payments Interest Group.</p>
+            Payments Interest Group. Through its liaison with the Web Payments Interest Group, this Working Group should remain aware of the evolution of the Web payments technology landscape.</p>
 
         <h3 id="payment_flow">Payment Flow</h3>
 
@@ -290,10 +290,9 @@
                 function that is complimentary to its payment capabilities.
             </li>
         </ul>
-          <p>This group is not developing standards for all digital wallet capabilities. This charter's scope is limited to payment flow capabilities. In the future, W3C expects to expand its activities to standardize additional
+          <p>This group is not developing standards for all digital wallet capabilities: this charter's scope is limited to payment flow capabilities. At the same time, this definition of wallet is not intended to constrain W3C's future activities. Indeed, W3C expects to expand its activities to standardize additional
 	    functions of physical wallets
-            such as holding digital receipts and digital credentials.
-	   The definition of wallet in this charter is not intended to constrain W3C's future activities. Furthermore, the wallet metaphor appropriate to this charter may change in future charters or may even become inappropriate. Through its liaison with the Web Payments Interest Group, this Working Group should remain aware of the evolution of the Web payments technology landscape.</p>
+            such as holding digital receipts and digital credentials. The wallet metaphor appropriate to this charter may change in future charters or may be dropped if no longer relevant.</p>
 
         <p>This Working Group intends to create a standard interface from the Web to a payer's wallet so that someone with any
             conforming wallet can seamlessly make payments with any conforming application running in a conforming