editorial: disambiguate a "this"
authorWendy Seltzer <wendy@seltzer.org>
Sat, 18 Jul 2015 08:37:47 -0400
changeset 523 196e9e3c780f
parent 511 a805e765aae0
child 524 2c8d82ab3d17
editorial: disambiguate a "this"
latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html
--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Fri Jul 17 18:31:46 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Sat Jul 18 08:37:47 2015 -0400
@@ -343,8 +343,8 @@
             </li>
             <li>
                 <strong>Web Payment Completion</strong>: The payee passes a payment completion request to a payer wallet
-                service which returns the details of the payment completion response. If this was a payer-initiated
-                payment, this is the trigger for the wallet service to execute the payment otherwise this is a message
+                service which returns the details of the payment completion response. If the payment was payer-initiated,
+                this is the trigger for the wallet service to execute the payment; otherwise this is a message
                 advising of the result of a payee initiated payment.
             </li>
         </ul>