Fix minor editorial issues with ED of roadmap.
authorManu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Thu, 16 Jul 2015 00:54:13 -0400
changeset 319 fd88141b2ca7
parent 318 534d0529002f
child 320 c37abe30bf26
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Fix minor editorial issues with ED of roadmap.
ED/roadmap/2015-07-17/index.html
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latest/roadmap/index.html
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   <h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-17-july-2015"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time property="dcterms:issued" class="dt-published" datetime="2015-07-17">17 July 2015</time></h2>
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       <dt>Latest published version:</dt>
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       <dd class="p-author h-card vcard"><span property="dc:contributor" typeof="foaf:Person"><meta property="foaf:name" content="Manu Sporny"><a class="u-url url p-name fn" property="foaf:homepage" href="https://manu.sporny.org/">Manu Sporny</a>, <a property="foaf:workplaceHomepage" class="p-org org h-org h-card" href="http://digitalbazaar.com/">Digital Bazaar</a></span>
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 <dd class="p-author h-card vcard"><span property="dc:contributor" typeof="foaf:Person"><meta property="foaf:name" content="Adrian Hope-Bailie"><a class="u-url url p-name fn" property="foaf:homepage" href="http://medium.com/@ahopebailie">Adrian Hope-Bailie</a>, <a property="foaf:workplaceHomepage" class="p-org org h-org h-card" href="http://www.ripplelabs.com/">Ripple Labs</a></span>
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         <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a> ©
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         <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr></a><sup>®</sup>
         (<a href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><abbr title="Massachusetts Institute of Technology">MIT</abbr></a>,
         <a href="http://www.ercim.eu/"><abbr title="European Research Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</abbr></a>,
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         <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Legal_Disclaimer">liability</a>,
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 deployment strategy for the Web Payments standardization work at <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr>.
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   </section><section id="sotd" class="introductory"><h2 id="h-sotd" resource="#h-sotd"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading">Status of This Document</span></h2>
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           Other documents may supersede this document. A list of current <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> publications and the
           latest revision of this technical report can be found in the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> technical reports index</a> at
           http://www.w3.org/TR/.</em>
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 This document is a work in progress and is being released early and often
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           This document was published by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/blog/wpig/">Web Payments Interest Group</a> as an Editor's Draft.
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             (<a href="mailto:public-webpayments-comments-request@w3.org?subject=subscribe">subscribe</a>,
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             Claim(s)</a> must disclose the information in accordance with
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             6 of the <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Patent Policy</a>.
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 </section><section id="toc"><h2 class="introductory" id="h-toc" resource="#h-toc"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading">Table of Contents</span></h2><ul class="toc" role="directory" id="respecContents"><li class="tocline"><a href="#introduction" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">1. </span>Introduction</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#terminology" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2. </span>Terminology</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#coordination" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">3. </span>Coordination</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#web-payments-phase-1" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4. </span>Web Payments Phase 1</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#goals" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.1 </span>Goals</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#use-cases" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.2 </span>Use Cases</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#capabilities" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.3 </span>Capabilities</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#groups-and-scope" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.4 </span>Groups and Scope</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#deployment-and-adoption" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.5 </span>Deployment and Adoption</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#goals-1" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.5.1 </span>Goals</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#strategies" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.5.2 </span>Strategies</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#unresolved-issues" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.6 </span>Unresolved Issues</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#acknowledgements" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">A. </span>Acknowledgements</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#references" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">B. </span>References</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#informative-references" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Informative references</a></li></ul></li></ul></section>
 
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   <dd>An economic exchange between a <a href="#dfn-payer" class="internalDFN">payer</a> and one or more
   <a title="payee" href="#dfn-payee" class="internalDFN">payees</a>. An agreement, communication, or movement
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+  funds, securities, other financial instruments or commodities) from
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+  <dt><dfn lt="pull payment|pull payments|payee-initiated payment|payee-initiated payments">payee-initiated payment</dfn></dt>
 
-  <dd>A type of <a>transaction</a> where the <a>payee</a> initiates the
+  <dd>Also known as a pull payment, a type of <a>transaction</a> where
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   discovery of an offer, negotiation of terms, selection of payment
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+  <dt><dfn lt="push payment|push payments|payer-initiated payment|payer-initiated payments">payer-initiated payment</dfn></dt>
 
-  <dd>A type of <a>transaction</a> where the <a>payer</a> initiates the
+  <dd>Also known as a push payment, a type of <a>transaction</a> where the
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   <dd>An economic exchange between a <a>payer</a> and one or more
   <a title="payee">payees</a>. An agreement, communication, or movement
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   funds, securities, other financial instruments or commodities) from
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               { name: "Adrian Hope-Bailie", url: "http://medium.com/@ahopebailie",
                 company: "Ripple Labs", companyURL: "http://www.ripplelabs.com/" },
+              { name: "Pat Adler", url: "https://www.linkedin.com/pub/patrick-adler/2/730/2b4",
+                company: "Federal Reserve Bank of Chicago", companyURL: "http://www.federalreserve.gov/"}
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