--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html Thu Apr 02 01:43:07 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html Thu Apr 02 16:39:30 2015 -0400
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@
<dt>Store Credit</dt>
<dd>
When Rick arrives as the self-checkout kiosk,
-he scans five dress shirts and two new pair of slacks.
+he scans five dress shirts and two new pairs of slacks.
The kiosk mentions that Rick could save 15% off of his <a>purchase</a>
if he makes the <a>purchase</a> using store credit. He accepts the offer and
a new store credit card is placed in his payment application on his mobile
@@ -1354,8 +1354,8 @@
and rapid, widespread adoption.
</dd>
<dt>Motivation</dt>
- <dd>We have as a goal that the Web payment architecture
- will support existing ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without changes to how they operate.
+ <dd>We have a goal for the Web payment architecture
+ to support existing ubiquitous <a title="payment scheme">payment schemes</a> without changes to how they operate.
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -1391,7 +1391,7 @@
<dl class="dl-horizontal">
<dt>Discovery</dt>
<dd>
-Yanos has a multiple digital wallets; one on his mobile phone, two in the
+Yanos has a multiple digital wallets: one on his mobile phone, two in the
cloud (but on different websites), and one on his smart watch. Each one has
a credit card that he may want to use for a credit card-based <a>purchase</a>.
</dd>
@@ -1564,7 +1564,7 @@
</li>
<li>
Frederic taps his phone at the grocery store to pay, and BankA sends him a
-one-time password (OTP) on his mobile phone that he enters in a keypad at
+one-time password (OTP) on his mobile phone that he enters using a keypad at
the checkout counter.
</li>
<li>
@@ -1592,7 +1592,7 @@
<dt>Accessibility</dt>
<dd>Not everyone can provide fingerprints or detailed iris scans.
Therefore, it is important to offer multiple forms
- biometric verification to improev accessibility.
+ biometric verification to improve accessibility.
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -1998,7 +1998,7 @@
<dt>Virtual Goods</dt>
<dd>
When Lilith buys music from a band at MusicBox and then goes to their
-Web site to download additional content, no account is required, just a
+Web site to download additional content, no registration is required, just a
proof of <a>purchase</a> that is sent to the band's website, after which
MusicBox provides Lilith a link to download the additional content.
</dd>
@@ -2101,7 +2101,7 @@
manager approves. The overcharged funds are returned to his account.
</li>
<li>
-Teo claims that a blender that they purchased online was faulty and returns
+Teo claims that a blender they purchased online was faulty and returns
the product to the merchant. The merchant provides the customer with a refund
in the form of store credit based on the return policy.
</li>
@@ -2161,18 +2161,18 @@
<h3>Credit Card Payment (Visa, MasterCard)</h3>
<p>
This scenario outlines a typical card purchase using the 4 corner model.
-Janet is buying an Hermes bag online from a resale shop.
+Janet is buying an handbag online from a resale shop.
</p>
<h4>Negotiation of Purchase Terms</h4>
<ul>
<li>
<strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>: Janet searches her favorite resale shop
-online to discover a gently used Hermes purse she has always wanted.
+online to discover a gently used purse that she has always wanted.
</li>
<li>
-<strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Janet selects the bag and puts it into
+<strong>Agreement on Terms</strong>: Janet selects the purse and puts it into
the shopping cart before others have a chance to buy it. She agrees with the
shipping terms and the amount of insurance paid for by the sender (seller).
</li>
@@ -2189,7 +2189,7 @@
<li>
<strong>Discovery of Accepted Schemes</strong>: The site takes
Discover/MasterCard/Visa/debit along with secured money order, Bitcoin,
-Google Wallet and ApplePay.
+Google Wallet, and ApplePay.
</li>
<li>