Add issues requesting further comment from external groups.
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</li>
</ul>
+ <p class="issue">
+The group seeks input from security, privacy, and accessibility experts.
+Examples of desired groups to perform these reviews are, but are not
+limited to: W3C Privacy Interest Group,
+W3C Security Interest Group, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative and
+Protocols and Formats Working Group, US Federal Reserve Security Panels,
+X9 Security subgroups, and ISO security subgroups.
+ </p>
+
<p>
The Interest Group (currently) regards some of the use cases as "essential" to
addressing their
@@ -382,6 +391,16 @@
either of which could be a person, business, government, or software
agent), which we organize into four phases:</p>
+ <p class="issue">
+The group would like feedback related to the general structure of the payment
+phases from individuals that worked on ISO20022, ISO12812, the
+European Payment Commission, and
+various X9 documents to ensure that the phases reflect business processes
+outlined in financial standardization initiatives. Feedback from the general
+public is also requested to see if non-payment professionals can navigate and
+understand the document without prior payment industry knowledge.
+ </p>
+
<ol>
<li>
Negotiation of Payment Terms
@@ -566,6 +585,13 @@
the payment phases</a>.
</p>
+ <p class="issue">
+General feedback is requested as to whether or not this section is helpful in
+grounding the payment phases and steps in a real world use case is helpful this
+early in the document. An alternative would be removing this section
+entirely if the precending section is enough.
+ </p>
+
<section>
<h3>Negotiation of <a>purchase</a> Terms</h3>
@@ -715,6 +741,14 @@
process.
</p>
+ <p class="issue">
+General feedback is requested related to the general structure of the
+use case snippets below. Are they focused enough to convey each topic listed?
+Is there information that should be added to each use case in general? Would
+more elaborate use cases be helpful. Would an attempt to minimize each existing
+use further be helpful in scanning the document more quickly?
+ </p>
+
<section>
<h3>Negotiation of Payment Terms</h3>
<p>
@@ -1640,7 +1674,7 @@
Before subjecting a person or organization to any financial <a>transaction</a>
commitment (such as a web payment), they should be presented with the option
of reversing, checking, or confirming their choice or submission. It should
-also be noted that this does not preclude certain <a>transaction</a> operations
+also be noted that this does not preclude certain <a>transaction</a> operations
from being automated once they have been authorized by an <a>entity</a>.
</a>For more details, see the section on
<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-WCAG20-20081211/#minimize-error-reversible">Error Prevention (Legal, Financial, Data)</a>
@@ -2087,6 +2121,14 @@
illustrate the phase steps.
</p>
+ <p class="issue">
+Input is requested from experts at each organization providing services
+mentioned below as well as engineers and designers of technologies used below.
+Specifically, if the payment flows outlined below contain errors or omissions
+the group would like to be to ensure that the oversight is corrected as soon
+as possible.
+ </p>
+
<section>
<h3>Credit Card Purchase</h3>
<p>