--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 03 00:28:06 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 03 00:50:29 2015 -0500
@@ -117,11 +117,11 @@
 complicate the payments landscape.
     </p>
     <p>
-The purpose of this document is to frame what a realistic
-next generation payment architecture built on top of the Web Platform could
-look like. The architecture is not meant to replace existing payment systems,
-but augment and simplify the interface to each system. The purpose of this
-payment architecture is to enable as many of the current
+The purpose of this document is to employ use cases to frame what a realistic
+vision looks like for payments on the Web Platform. The end result is not 
+meant to replace existing payment systems, but augment and simplify the 
+interface to each system via the Web. The purpose of this
+initiative is to enable as many of the current
 <tref>payment schemes</tref> in use today (such as electronic
 cheques, credit cards, direct debit, and cryptocurrencies) to be
 used more easily and securely on the Web while ensuring that future payment
@@ -170,17 +170,17 @@
     </p>
     <p>
 These phases can be applied to a variety of different payment scenarios such
-as person-to-person, person-to-business, business-to-person, 
+as person-to-person, person-to-business, business-to-person,
 government-to-person, and so forth.
     </p>
 
     <section>
       <h3>Negotiation of Payment Terms</h3>
       <p>
-The first phase of the payment process is where the payer and the payee 
+The first phase of the payment process is where the payer and the payee
 negotiate the terms of the payment.
       </p>
-      
+
       <ul>
         <li>
 <strong>Discovery of Offer</strong>. Payer discovers Payee offer (e.g., by browsing a Web page or from a native application).
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@
       <h3>Funds Transfer</h3>
       <p>
 The third phase of the payment process is used to initiate the transfer of
-funds. Depending on the payment instrument, the transfer of funds may be 
+funds. Depending on the payment instrument, the transfer of funds may be
 verified immediately or may take several days to be verified.
       </p>
  	    <ul>