Clarify note about example.
authorIan Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
Tue, 31 Mar 2015 12:46:31 -0500
changeset 148 7fc3d1fd6901
parent 147 678b2e41db2f
child 149 7c0d95f386cb
Clarify note about example.

- another option is move to section 7
-fixed typo
latest/use-cases/index.html
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 31 12:45:35 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Tue Mar 31 12:46:31 2015 -0500
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
 General feedback is requested as to whether or not this section is helpful in
 grounding the payment phases and steps in a real world use case is helpful this
 early in the document. An alternative would be removing this section
-entirely if the precending section is enough.
+entirely if the preceding section suffices, or moving this narrative to section 7 with other examples.
     </p>
 
     <section>