--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Wed Jul 15 11:21:51 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Wed Jul 15 12:10:28 2015 -0700
@@ -111,7 +111,9 @@
         <li>Improved security and privacy by providing information only to those parties that require it to complete a
             transaction.
         </li>
-        <li>Easier integration of new payment schemes by payment service providers, increasing merchant acceptance.</li>
+        <li>Easier integration of new payment schemes by payment service providers, increasing the variety of payment
+            instruments accepted by payees.
+        </li>
         <li>Increased scope for <a href="#wallets">digital wallet</a> innovation by banks, retailers, mobile operators,
             card networks, and other wallet providers.
         </li>
@@ -199,8 +201,8 @@
                     <li>
                         <strong>Payment Initiation Request</strong>, by the payee to the payer providing the terms of
                         the payment including elements such as the accepted payment schemes, price, currency,
-                        recurrence, transaction type (purchase, refund etc.) and requests for any additional data that
-                        is required from the payee.
+                        recurrence, transaction type (purchase, refund etc.), timeout and requests for any additional
+                        data that is required from the payee.
                     </li>
                 </ul>
             </dd>
@@ -331,7 +333,8 @@
         <h3 id="rec_track">Recommendation-track deliverables</h3>
         <h4 id="Web_Payment_Vocabularies_1.0">Web Payment Vocabularies 1.0</h4>
 
-        <p>The Working Group will develop machine-readable vocabularies that enable the following:</p>
+        <p>The Working Group will develop machine-readable vocabularies (and a mechanism to manage the lifecycle of
+            these vocabularies) that enable the following:</p>
         <ul>
             <li>
                 <strong>Payment Scheme Description</strong>: this vocabulary is used by payees to represent accepted