editorial clarification and parallelism
authorWendy Seltzer <wendy@seltzer.org>
Sat, 18 Jul 2015 08:35:51 -0400
changeset 512 292fbc5aa6ac
parent 511 a805e765aae0
editorial clarification and parallelism
latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html
--- a/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Fri Jul 17 18:31:46 2015 -0500
+++ b/latest/charters/payments-wg-charter.html	Sat Jul 18 08:35:51 2015 -0400
@@ -283,8 +283,8 @@
             available to the payer. This charter does not seek to preclude those additional services, and in the future
             W3C may look for opportunities increase the interoperability of such services. The wallet metaphor appropriate to this charter may change in future charters or may be dropped if no longer relevant.</p>
 
-        <p>This Working Group intends to create a standard interface from the Web to a payer's wallet so that someone with any
-            conforming wallet can seamlessly make payments with any conforming application running in a conforming
+        <p>This Working Group intends to create a standard interface between a payer's wallet and the Web so that someone with any
+            conforming wallet can seamlessly make payments with any conforming application running in any conforming
             user agent. The group may define APIs that will also be used outside of a user agent context (such as
             between
             Web services, or from within a native application, where the browser is not the proxy between wallet and