Fix a number of errors spotted by Shane McCarron.
authorManu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Mon, 30 Mar 2015 01:17:53 -0400
changeset 93 05252df7165f
parent 92 7cc26f425740
child 94 d20801801d13
child 95 fe32ffa73051
Fix a number of errors spotted by Shane McCarron.
latest/use-cases/index.html
--- a/latest/use-cases/index.html	Mon Mar 30 00:53:18 2015 -0400
+++ b/latest/use-cases/index.html	Mon Mar 30 01:17:53 2015 -0400
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@
     font-weight: normal;
     float: left;
     width: 160px;
+    clear: left;
     overflow: hidden;
-    clear: left;
     text-align: right;
     text-overflow: ellipsis;
     white-space: nowrap;
@@ -965,6 +965,13 @@
 Car manufacturers and the entertainment industry may be interested in
 extending their sales channels into vehicles.
             </dd>
+            <dt>Accessibility</dt>
+            <dd>
+It is important that the interface used to interact with the digital offer
+does not distract the driver of the vehicle. For example, the use of
+voice controls is preferred over a visual interface that requires the driver
+to look away from the road.
+            </dd>
           </dl>
 
         </section>
@@ -1208,7 +1215,7 @@
           </dd>
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
           <dd>
-Loyalty cards may be used at multiple locations to augment the price of a
+Loyalty cards may be used at multiple locations to effect the price of a
 particular good.
           </dd>
         </dl>
@@ -1344,7 +1351,7 @@
 purchase.
               </li>
               <li>
-Claire has multiple credit cards from the same bank as well as one debit card.
+Claire has one debit card and multiple credit cards from the same bank.
               </li>
               <li>
 Veronique wants to use a cryptocurrency in some cases (e.g.,
@@ -1357,7 +1364,7 @@
 </span>
               </li>
               <li>
-David wants to be able to manually order available
+David wants to be able to manually arrange available
 <a title="payment instrument">payment instruments</a> when they are presented
 to him. <span class="issue">Why does this need to be standardized?
 Isn't this just a part of the wallet UI?</span>
@@ -1518,7 +1525,7 @@
         </dl>
 
         <dl class="dl-horizontal">
-          <dt>KYC / AML</dt>
+          <dt>Regulatory Blocks</dt>
           <dd>
 PayCo must ensure that their customers do not appear on any regulatory
 blacklists when performing <a>transaction</a>s above a certain monetary amount.
@@ -1558,7 +1565,7 @@
 Rico buys a $5,000 car for his daughter through an online dealership. His
 <a>payment processor</a> requires a password plus two forms of biometric
 identification. Rico doesn't have hands, so he uses a face and iris scan to
-perform the authentication
+perform the authentication.
                 </li>
               </ul>
             </dd>
@@ -1575,7 +1582,7 @@
             <dt>Motivation</dt>
             <dd>
 In current online and offline payment <a>transaction</a>s, biometric
-authentication can be used to instead of password-based authentication.
+authentication can be used instead of password-based authentication.
 Biometrics can be utilized on Point of Sale terminals, mobile, and wearable
 devices. Web payment systems based on biometrics could achieve more reliable
 information security and convenience. Some forms of biometric authentication,
@@ -1668,7 +1675,7 @@
 to the <a>payee</a>. For example, credit card information along with
 expiration date, name, and CVV2 code are transmitted and could be intercepted
 by rogue software running on the <a title="payer">payer's</a> servers.
-Special attention should be paid to ensuring that this sort of broken security
+Special attention should be paid to ensuring that this risky security
 model isn't supported by a Web Payments solution. For example, at a minimum,
 credit card tokenization such as EMVCo's solution should be supported
 alongside other tokenization solutions.
@@ -1731,7 +1738,7 @@
           <dd>
 Delivering services or products that are difficult to "undo", such
 as performing an oil change, dispensing fuel, or renting a car or hotel
-room, are examples of situations which may require a two-part
+room are examples of situations which may require a two-part
 <a>transaction</a>.
           </dd>
         </dl>
@@ -1854,7 +1861,7 @@
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
           <dd>
 When a <a>transaction</a> occurs, the time it takes to transmit and receive
-funds often vary according to <a>payment scheme</a>.
+funds often vary according to the <a>payment scheme</a>.
           </dd>
           <dt>Exceptions</dt>
           <dd>
@@ -1869,7 +1876,7 @@
           <dl class="dl-horizontal">
             <dt>Notifications</dt>
             <dd>
-Gavin sends and electronic cheque to WaveMart. WaveMart receives a notification
+Gavin sends an electronic cheque to WaveMart. WaveMart receives a notification
 that payment has been initiated almost immediately. Four days later, WaveMart
 receives a notification from their bank that payment has been received.
             </dd>
@@ -1973,7 +1980,7 @@
           <dt>Motivation</dt>
           <dd>
 Electronic receipts will make it easier to track expenses, prove that
-certain  <a title="purchase">purchases</a> were made, file taxes, and
+certain  <a title="purchase">purchases</a> were made, file tax returns, and
 simplify management of unnecessary paper.
           </dd>
           <dt>Privacy / Security</dt>
@@ -2012,7 +2019,7 @@
           <dt>Accessibility</dt>
           <dd>
 Implementations should ensure that people who have visual disabilities have
-options such as Braille output for physical receipts along-side high-contrast /
+options such as Braille output for physical receipts alongside high-contrast /
 large print lettering.
           </dd>
         </dl>
@@ -2149,7 +2156,7 @@
 
       <p>
 <strong>Delivery of Receipt</strong>: The booking website sees that Anna's
-airline ticket order has been paid and sends a receipt massage to her
+airline ticket order has been paid and sends a receipt message to her
 digital wallet.
       </p>