Edits to the introduction
authorJosh Soref <josh.soref@nokia.com>
Sun, 01 May 2011 11:34:52 +0200
changeset 87 4b363819e79b
parent 86 653218ffd9c4
child 88 dcdef856c426
child 89 e67b0a0fba5e
Edits to the introduction
touchevents.html
--- a/touchevents.html	Sun May 01 11:29:25 2011 +0200
+++ b/touchevents.html	Sun May 01 11:34:52 2011 +0200
@@ -109,13 +109,13 @@
 
       <p>
         User Agents that run on terminals which provide touch input to use web
-        applications typically use interpreted mouse events to allow the users
+        applications typically use interpreted mouse events to allow users
         to access interactive web applications. However, these interpreted
         events, being normalized data based on the physical touch input, tend
-        to have limitations on delivering the exact intended user experience.
+        to have limitations on delivering the intended user experience.
         Additionally, it is not possible to handle concurrent input regardless
-        of the device capability, due the constraints of mouse events: both
-        system level limitations, and legacy compatibility.
+        of device capability, due to constraints of mouse events: both
+        system level limitations and legacy compatibility.
       </p>
 
       <p>