--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Wed Apr 23 14:33:43 2014 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Wed Apr 23 23:37:41 2014 -0700
@@ -217,11 +217,11 @@
   </p>
   <h1 class="title p-name" id="title" property="dcterms:title">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions 1.0</h1>
   
-  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-04-24T04:19:22.000Z" id="w3c-first-public-working-draft-23-april-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> First Public Working Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-04-23">23 April 2014</time></h2>
+  <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-04-24T13:34:33.000Z" id="w3c-first-public-working-draft-24-april-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> First Public Working Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-04-24">24 April 2014</time></h2>
   <dl>
     
       <dt>This version:</dt>
-      <dd><a class="u-url" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140423/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140423/</a></dd>
+      <dd><a class="u-url" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140424/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140424/</a></dd>
       <dt>Latest published version:</dt>
       <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/">http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/</a></dd>
     
@@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@
     </section>
 
     <section id="recommended-character-sets">
-      <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span class="secno">5.2 </span>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to select from the sets of characters specified in <a href="#recommended-character-sets-1"></a>
+      <h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_recommended-character-sets"><span class="secno">5.2 </span>Recommended Character Sets</h3><p>Authors should select from the sets of characters specified in <a href="#recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language" class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">A.</span> <span class="sec-title">Recommended Character Sets</span></a>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section id="features">
@@ -2183,8 +2183,8 @@
   <section class="appendix" id="recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language" rel="bibo:Chapter">
     <!--OddPage--><h2 aria-level="1" role="heading" id="h2_recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language"><span class="secno">A. </span>Recommended Character Sets</h2>
 
-    <p>When authoring textual content, authors are encouraged to select from sets of characters based on the language expressed
-    using the xml:lang. The idea is to increase the confidence that the text will be presented correctly by implementations
+    <p>When authoring textual content, authors are encouraged to select from sets of characters based on the language indicated
+    using <code>xml:lang</code>. The idea is to increase the confidence that the text will be presented correctly by implementations
     targeting specific locales.</p>
 
     <p>Specifically, for a given language, an author should choose characters from the set resulting from the union of the
@@ -2567,7 +2567,8 @@
   </section>
 
 
-<section id="references" class="appendix" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><!--OddPage--><h2 aria-level="1" role="heading" id="h2_references"><span class="secno">C. </span>References</h2><section id="normative-references" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#normative-references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_normative-references"><span class="secno">C.1 </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography" about=""><dt id="bib-MHP">[MHP]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">ETSI TS 101 812 V1.3.1, Digital Video Broadcasting (DVB); Multimedia Home
+<section id="references" class="appendix" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><!--OddPage--><h2 aria-level="1" role="heading" id="h2_references"><span class="secno">C. </span>References</h2><section id="normative-references" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#normative-references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_normative-references"><span class="secno">C.1 </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography" about=""><dt id="bib-CLDR">[CLDR]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">Unicode Consortium. <a href="http://cldr.unicode.org">The Common Locale Data Repository Project</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-MHP">[MHP]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">ETSI TS 101 812 V1.3.1, Digital Video Broadcasting (DVB); Multimedia Home
 </dd><dt id="bib-RFC2119">[RFC2119]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">S. Bradner. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels.</cite></a> March 1997. Internet RFC 2119.  URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-ST2052-1">[ST2052-1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">SMPTE ST 2052-1, Timed Text Format (SMPTE-TT)
 </dd><dt id="bib-TTML1">[TTML1]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">World Wide Web Consortium (W3C). Timed Text Markup Language 1 (TTML1) (Second Edition)
@@ -2575,7 +2576,6 @@
 </dd><dt id="bib-xml-names">[xml-names]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:requires">Tim Bray; Dave Hollander; Andrew Layman; Richard Tobin; Henry Thompson et al. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xml-names"><cite>Namespaces in XML 1.0 (Third Edition)</cite></a>. 8 December 2009. W3C Recommendation. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xml-names">http://www.w3.org/TR/xml-names</a>
 </dd></dl></section><section id="informative-references" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#informative-references" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h3 aria-level="2" role="heading" id="h3_informative-references"><span class="secno">C.2 </span>Informative references</h3><dl class="bibliography" about=""><dt id="bib-CEA-608">[CEA-608]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:references"><a href="http://www.ce.org/Standards/Standard-Listings/R4-3-Television-Data-Systems-Subcommittee/Line-21-Data-Service.aspx">Line-21 Data Services</a>, ANSI/CEA Standard.
 </dd><dt id="bib-CEA-708">[CEA-708]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:references"><a href="http://www.ce.org/Standards/Standard-Listings/R4-3-Television-Data-Systems-Subcommittee/CEA-708-D.aspx">Digital Television (DTV) Closed Captioning</a>, ANSI/CEA Standard.
-</dd><dt id="bib-CLDR">[CLDR]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:references">Unicode Consortium. <a href="http://cldr.unicode.org">The Common Locale Data Repository Project</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-SDPUS">[SDPUS]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:references">World Wide Web Consortium (W3C). <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml10-sdp-us/">TTML Simple Delivery Profile for Closed Captions (US)</a> (W3C Working Group Note, 05 February 2013)
 </dd><dt id="bib-SUBM">[SUBM]</dt><dd rel="dcterms:references">World Wide Web Consortium (W3C). <a href="http://www.w3.org/Submission/2013/SUBM-ttml-ww-profiles-20130607/">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions</a> (Member Submission, 07 June 2013)
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--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Wed Apr 23 14:33:43 2014 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Wed Apr 23 23:37:41 2014 -0700
@@ -881,8 +881,8 @@
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <h3>Recommended Character Sets</h3>Authors should to select from the sets of characters specified in <a href=
-      "#recommended-character-sets-1"></a>
+      <h3>Recommended Character Sets</h3><p>Authors should select from the sets of characters specified in <a href=
+      "#recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language"></a>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
@@ -1890,17 +1890,17 @@
   <section class='appendix' id='recommended-unicode-code-points-per-language'>
     <h2>Recommended Character Sets</h2>
 
-    <p>When authoring textual content, authors are encouraged to select from sets of characters based on the language expressed
-    using the xml:lang. The idea is to increase the confidence that the text will be presented correctly by implementations
+    <p>When authoring textual content, authors are encouraged to select from sets of characters based on the language indicated
+    using <code>xml:lang</code>. The idea is to increase the confidence that the text will be presented correctly by implementations
     targeting specific locales.</p>
 
     <p>Specifically, for a given language, an author should choose characters from the set resulting from the union of the
     following sets:</p>
 
     <ul>
-      <li>the main and punctuation exemplar character sets specified for the language in [[CLDR]]; and</li>
-
-      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [[CLDR]]; and</li>
+      <li>the main and punctuation exemplar character sets specified for the language in [[!CLDR]]; and</li>
+
+      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [[!CLDR]]; and</li>
 
       <li>the common character set specified in Table 1; and</li>