--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html Wed Aug 13 17:39:41 2014 +0200
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html Thu Aug 14 15:12:45 2014 +0200
@@ -217,11 +217,11 @@
</p>
<h1 class="title p-name" id="title" property="dcterms:title">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions 1.0</h1>
- <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-08-13T13:36:57.000Z" id="w3c-first-public-working-draft-13-august-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> First Public Working Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-08-13">13 August 2014</time></h2>
+ <h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2014-08-14T11:10:42.000Z" id="w3c-first-public-working-draft-14-august-2014"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> First Public Working Draft <time class="dt-published" datetime="2014-08-14">14 August 2014</time></h2>
<dl>
<dt>This version:</dt>
- <dd><a class="u-url" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140813/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140813/</a></dd>
+ <dd><a class="u-url" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140814/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/WD-ttml-imsc1-20140814/</a></dd>
<dt>Latest published version:</dt>
<dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/">http://www.w3.org/TR/ttml-imsc1/</a></dd>
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
<section id="ttp-progressivelyDecodable" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#ttp-progressivelyDecodable" rel="bibo:Chapter">
<h4 aria-level="3" role="heading" id="h4_ttp-progressivelyDecodable"><span class="secno">5.5.2 </span>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</h4>
- <p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is structured to facilitate processing before the document is received in
+ <p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is structured to facilitate presentation before the document is received in
its entirety, and can be identified using <code>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</code> attribute.</p>
<p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is a subtitle document that conforms to the following:</p>
@@ -683,13 +683,13 @@
<ol>
<li>no attribute or element of the TTML timing vocabulary is present within the <code>head</code> element;</li>
- <li>given two Intermediate Synchronic Documents A and B with presentation times TA and TB, respectively, TA is not
- greater than TB if A maps to a <code>p</code> element that occurs earlier in the document than any <code>p</code> element
- to which B maps;</li>
+ <li>given two of its Intermediate Synchronic Documents <em>A</em> and <em>B</em> with start times <em>TA</em> and <em>TB</em>, respectively, <em>TA</em> is not
+ greater than <em>TB</em> if <em>A</em> includes a <code>p</code> element that occurs earlier in the document than any <code>p</code> element
+ that <em>B</em> includes;</li>
<li>no attribute of the TTML timing vocabulary is present on a child element of <code>p</code>; and</li>
- <li>no first element references a second element that occurs after the first element in the document.</li>
+ <li>no element <em>E1</em> explicitly references, e.g. using <code>xml:id</code>, another element <em>E2</em> where the opening tag of <em>E2</em> occurs after the opening tag of <em>E1</em>.</li>
</ol>
<p>The <code>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</code> attribute shall conform to the following syntax:</p>
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html Wed Aug 13 17:39:41 2014 +0200
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html Thu Aug 14 15:12:45 2014 +0200
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@
<section id='ttp-progressivelyDecodable'>
<h4>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</h4>
- <p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is structured to facilitate processing before the document is received in
+ <p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is structured to facilitate presentation before the document is received in
its entirety, and can be identified using <code>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</code> attribute.</p>
<p>A progressively decodable subtitle document is a subtitle document that conforms to the following:</p>
@@ -384,13 +384,13 @@
<ol>
<li>no attribute or element of the TTML timing vocabulary is present within the <code>head</code> element;</li>
- <li>given two Intermediate Synchronic Documents A and B with presentation times TA and TB, respectively, TA is not
- greater than TB if A maps to a <code>p</code> element that occurs earlier in the document than any <code>p</code> element
- to which B maps;</li>
+ <li>given two of its Intermediate Synchronic Documents <em>A</em> and <em>B</em> with start times <em>TA</em> and <em>TB</em>, respectively, <em>TA</em> is not
+ greater than <em>TB</em> if <em>A</em> includes a <code>p</code> element that occurs earlier in the document than any <code>p</code> element
+ that <em>B</em> includes;</li>
<li>no attribute of the TTML timing vocabulary is present on a child element of <code>p</code>; and</li>
- <li>no first element references a second element that occurs after the first element in the document.</li>
+ <li>no element <em>E1</em> explicitly references, e.g. using <code>xml:id</code>, another element <em>E2</em> where the opening tag of <em>E2</em> occurs after the opening tag of <em>E1</em>.</li>
</ol>
<p>The <code>ittp:progressivelyDecodable</code> attribute shall conform to the following syntax:</p>