--- a/ttml2/spec/ttml2.xml Fri Aug 23 12:05:59 2013 -0600
+++ b/ttml2/spec/ttml2.xml Fri Aug 23 12:13:22 2013 -0600
@@ -104,8 +104,8 @@
<errataloc href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/ttml/raw-file/default/ttml10/spec/ttml-issues.html"/>
<translationloc href="http://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology=ttml2"/>
<abstract id="abstract">
-<p>This document specifies the Timed Text Markup Language (TTML) in terms of a
-vocabulary and semantics thereof.</p>
+<p>This document specifies the Timed Text Markup Language (TTML), Version 2, also known as TTML2,
+in terms of a vocabulary and semantics thereof.</p>
<p>The Timed Text Markup Language is a content type that represents
timed text media for the purpose of interchange among authoring
systems. Timed text is textual information that is intrinsically or
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
<div1 id="intro">
<head>Introduction</head>
<p><emph>Unless specified otherwise, this section and its sub-sections are non-normative.</emph></p>
-<p>The Timed Text Markup Language 2 (TTML2)
+<p>The Timed Text Markup Language (TTML), Version 2, also referred to as TTML2,
provides a standardized representation of a particular subset of
textual information with which stylistic, layout, and timing semantics are associated by
an author or an authoring system for the purpose of interchange and processing.</p>
@@ -139,15 +139,14 @@
need of performing interchange with existing, legacy distribution systems are
satisfied.</p>
<p>In addition to being used for interchange among legacy distribution content
-formats, TTML Content may be used directly as a distribution format (as implied by
-the acronym DFXP), providing, for
+formats, TTML Content may be used directly as a distribution format, providing, for
example, a standard content format to reference from a <el><track></el>
element in an HTML5 document, or a <el><text></el> or
<el><textstream></el> media element in a <bibref
ref="smil21"/> document. Certain properties of TTML support
streamability of content, as described in <specref ref="streaming"/>.</p>
<note>
-<p>While TTML was not expressly designed for direct (embedded) integration into an
+<p>While TTML is not expressly designed for direct (embedded) integration into an
HTML or a SMIL document instance, such integration is not precluded.</p>
</note>
<note>