[imsc1] futher address ISSUE-390 (editorial)
authorplemieux
Thu, 11 Jun 2015 07:24:07 -0700
changeset 943 07fda09985c1
parent 942 36b712b3aeb5
child 944 44f5a238485a
[imsc1] futher address ISSUE-390 (editorial)
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html
ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Wed Jun 10 22:26:53 2015 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.html	Thu Jun 11 07:24:07 2015 -0700
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
   </p>
   <h1 class="title p-name" id="title" property="dcterms:title">TTML Text and Image Profiles for Internet Media Subtitles and Captions 1.0</h1>
   
-  <h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-10-june-2015"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time property="dcterms:issued" class="dt-published" datetime="2015-06-10">10 June 2015</time></h2>
+  <h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-11-june-2015"><abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> Editor's Draft <time property="dcterms:issued" class="dt-published" datetime="2015-06-11">11 June 2015</time></h2>
   <dl>
     
       <dt>This version:</dt>
@@ -2201,7 +2201,7 @@
         <ul>
           <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>0</sub> minus Initial Painting Delay (IPD), if n = 0; or</li>
 
-          <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>n-1</sub>, if n &gt; 0</li>
+          <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>n-1</sub>, if n &gt; 0.</li>
         </ul>
 
         <p>The duration DUR(E<sub>n</sub>) for painting an <a href="#dfn-intermediate-synchronic-document" class="internalDFN">intermediate synchronic document</a> E<sub>n</sub> in the
@@ -2223,7 +2223,7 @@
           </li>
 
           <li>DUR<sub>I</sub>(E<sub>n</sub>) is the duration, in seconds, for painting the image subtitle content for intermediate
-          synchronic document E<sub>n</sub>, as specified in Section <a href="#paint-images" class="sec-ref"><span class="secno">9.4</span> <span class="sec-title">Paint Images</span></a>
+          synchronic document E<sub>n</sub>, as specified in Section <a href="#paint-images">.</a>
           </li>
         </ul>
 
@@ -2481,7 +2481,7 @@
 
           <li>Ren(G<sub>i</sub>) is the text rendering performance factor glyph G<sub>i</sub>; and</li>
 
-          <li>GCpy is the normalized glyph copy performance factor</li>
+          <li>GCpy is the normalized glyph copy performance factor.</li>
         </ul>
 
         <p>G<sub>r</sub> and G<sub>c</sub> <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL">SHALL</em> include only glyphs in <a title="presented region" href="#dfn-presented-region" class="internalDFN">presented regions</a> and <em class="rfc2119" title="SHALL NOT">SHALL NOT</em> include a [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-UNICODE">UNICODE</a></cite>] Code Point if it does not result in a change to presentation, e.g. the Code Point is
@@ -2633,13 +2633,13 @@
     <ul>
       <li>the main exemplar character set specified for the language in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-CLDR">CLDR</a></cite>] as well as any corresponding uppercase characters as specified in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-UNICODE">UNICODE</a></cite>]; and</li>
 			
-			<li>the punctuation exemplar character set specified for the language in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-CLDR">CLDR</a></cite>]; and</li>
-
-      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-CLDR">CLDR</a></cite>]; and</li>
+			<li>the punctuation exemplar character set specified for the language in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-CLDR">CLDR</a></cite>];</li>
+
+      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-CLDR">CLDR</a></cite>];</li>
 
       <li>the common character set specified in Table 1; and</li>
 
-      <li>supplementary characters specified for the language in Table 2, if any</li>
+      <li>supplementary characters specified for the language in Table 2, if any.</li>
     </ul>
 
     <p>Some of these sets <em class="rfc2119" title="MAY">MAY</em> overlap.</p>
--- a/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Wed Jun 10 22:26:53 2015 -0700
+++ b/ttml-ww-profiles/ttml-ww-profiles.source.html	Thu Jun 11 07:24:07 2015 -0700
@@ -1886,7 +1886,7 @@
         <ul>
           <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>0</sub> minus Initial Painting Delay (IPD), if n = 0; or</li>
 
-          <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>n-1</sub>, if n &gt; 0</li>
+          <li>at the presentation time of E<sub>n-1</sub>, if n &gt; 0.</li>
         </ul>
 
         <p>The duration DUR(E<sub>n</sub>) for painting an <a>intermediate synchronic document</a> E<sub>n</sub> in the
@@ -1908,7 +1908,7 @@
           </li>
 
           <li>DUR<sub>I</sub>(E<sub>n</sub>) is the duration, in seconds, for painting the image subtitle content for intermediate
-          synchronic document E<sub>n</sub>, as specified in Section <a href="#paint-images"></a>
+          synchronic document E<sub>n</sub>, as specified in Section <a href="#paint-images">.</a>
           </li>
         </ul>
 
@@ -2167,7 +2167,7 @@
 
           <li>Ren(G<sub>i</sub>) is the text rendering performance factor glyph G<sub>i</sub>; and</li>
 
-          <li>GCpy is the normalized glyph copy performance factor</li>
+          <li>GCpy is the normalized glyph copy performance factor.</li>
         </ul>
 
         <p>G<sub>r</sub> and G<sub>c</sub> SHALL include only glyphs in <a title="presented region">presented regions</a> and SHALL
@@ -2323,13 +2323,13 @@
     <ul>
       <li>the main exemplar character set specified for the language in [[!CLDR]] as well as any corresponding uppercase characters as specified in [[!UNICODE]]; and</li>
 			
-			<li>the punctuation exemplar character set specified for the language in [[!CLDR]]; and</li>
-
-      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [[!CLDR]]; and</li>
+			<li>the punctuation exemplar character set specified for the language in [[!CLDR]];</li>
+
+      <li>the digits and symbols included in all numberSystems specified for the language in [[!CLDR]];</li>
 
       <li>the common character set specified in Table 1; and</li>
 
-      <li>supplementary characters specified for the language in Table 2, if any</li>
+      <li>supplementary characters specified for the language in Table 2, if any.</li>
     </ul>
 
     <p>Some of these sets MAY overlap.</p>