Tweaks for comments from Dirk, and References section changes.
authorCameron McCormack <cam@mcc.id.au>
Fri, 11 Apr 2014 02:01:34 +1000
changeset 657 79bd8f8bd9cb
parent 656 c4a2bca84e81
child 658 c29afd6d4ad0
Tweaks for comments from Dirk, and References section changes.
specs/integration/master/Overview.html
--- a/specs/integration/master/Overview.html	Fri Apr 11 01:25:28 2014 +1000
+++ b/specs/integration/master/Overview.html	Fri Apr 11 02:01:34 2014 +1000
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
         text-align: right;
     }
     .embedcontext, table.ref_modes td {
-        width: 150px;
-        height: 150px;
+        width: 120px;
+        height: 120px;
     }
     table.ref_modes td {
         border: gainsboro 1px solid;
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
     }
     .bg {
         background-image: url(./smiley.svg);
-        width: 150px;
-        height: 150px;
+        width: 120px;
+        height: 120px;
     }
     table.features {
         border: gray 1px solid;
@@ -243,10 +243,11 @@
 any user agent style sheet rules to apply, and more.</p>
 
 <p>Normative requirements are given for contexts in other SVG documents,
-such as how an SVG <a>'image'</a> element must treat a referenced SVG
+such as how an SVG <a>'image'</a> element must treat referenced SVG
 documents.  Non-normative recommendations are given for other languages,
 including HTML and CSS, with the expectation that these other specifications
-will normatively reference the referencing mode definitions in this document.</p>
+will in time define which referencing mode from this document to use
+when SVG documents are used in a given context.</p>
 
 <div class="issue">
   <p>There are other things we may wish to include in this document, including:</p>
@@ -285,9 +286,9 @@
 fragment is to be processed.</p>
 
 <p>This section defines a number of <dfn id="referencing-mode">referencing
-modes</dfn> that encompass the different ways SVG document fragments can
-be used on the Web platform and which specify how the SVG document fragments must be
-processed.  Each referencing mode is defined by requiring the SVG document fragment
+modes</dfn> that encompass the different ways SVG documents can
+be used on the Web platform and which specify how the documents must be
+processed.  Each referencing mode is defined by requiring the SVG document
 be processed in a given <a href="#processing-mode">processing mode</a>.
 Processing modes are introduced in <a href="#processing-modes">section 3</a> below
 and define which features are enabled or disabled in the document.</p>
@@ -298,6 +299,10 @@
 specifications to normatively point to the appropriate referencing mode
 from this document.</p>
 
+<p class="issue">In this document we might need to define exactly how
+to invoke the Fetch algorithm when resources are retrieved from a document
+running in a particular referencing mode.</p>
+
 <p>The available <a href="#referencing-mode">referencing modes</a> are as follows:</p>
 
 <dl>
@@ -313,7 +318,8 @@
 
     <p class="note">This referencing mode is intended to be used when
     an SVG document is loaded in a browser's
-    <a href="http://www.whatwg.org/specs/web-apps/current-work/multipage/browsers.html#top-level-browsing-context">top-level browsing context</a>.</p>
+    <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/CR-html5-20140204/browsers.html#top-level-browsing-context">top-level browsing context</a>.
+    <a href='#ref-HTML5'>[HTML5]</a></p>
   </dd>
 
   <dt><dfn id="embedded-document-mode">embedded document</dfn></dt>
@@ -325,6 +331,9 @@
     <a href="#embedded-document">embedded document</a>
     <a href="#referencing-mode">referencing mode</a>.</p>
 
+    <p class="note">Note that the embedded document referencing mode
+    is not used for inline SVG fragments within an HTML document.</p>
+
     <p>SVG documents processed with the
     <a href="#embedded-document-mode">embedded document</a>
     <a href="#referencing-mode">referencing mode</a> must use the
@@ -744,11 +753,6 @@
 animation is supported if the left eye is winking.</p>
 
 <table class="ref_modes" border="0" cellpadding="2" cellspacing="2">
-  <thead>
-    <tr>
-      <th colspan="5">Example 1: Different <a>referencing modes</a> in HTML</th>
-    </tr>
-  </thead>
   <tbody>
     <tr>
       <th>object</th>
@@ -770,7 +774,7 @@
       <td>
         <img class="embedcontext" alt="smiley face" src="smiley.svg" />
       </td>
-      <td class="bg">&#xA0;</td>
+      <td><div class="bg">&#xA0;</div></td>
     </tr>
   </tbody>
 </table>
@@ -1196,7 +1200,7 @@
 
 <h2 id="refs">References</h2>
 
-<h3 id="normrefs">Normative References</h3>
+<h3 id="normrefs">Normative references</h3>
 
 <dl>
   <dt id="ref-RFC2119"><strong class="normref">[RFC2119]</strong></dt>
@@ -1226,23 +1230,26 @@
   <br />The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/SVG2/">latest edition of SVG 2</a> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/SVG2/.</dd>
 </dl>
 
-<h3 id="informrefs">Informative References</h3>
+<h3 id="nonnormrefs">Non-normative references</h3>
 
 <dl>
+<!--
   <dt class="w3ccr"><strong class="informref">[CSS2]</strong></dt>
   <dd><cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/CR-CSS2-20090908/">Cascading Style Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification</a></cite>,
   B. Bos, T. &#xC7;elik, I. Hickson, H.W. Lie, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 23 April 2009, <strong>Work in Progress</strong>.
   <br/>This version of the CSS 2.1 Specification is http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090908/.
   <br/>The <a class="normative" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/">latest version of CSS 2.1</a> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/.</dd>
+-->
 
-  <dt id="references-HTML5"><strong class="informref">[HTML5]</strong></dt>
-  <dd><cite class="w3cwd"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-html5-20090825/">HTML 5</a></cite>,
-  I. Hickson, D. Hyatt, eds.
-  World Wide Web Consortium, <span class="wip">work in progress</span>, 25 August 2009.
-  <br />This edition of HTML 5 is http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-html5-20090825/.
-  <br />The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/">latest edition of HTML 5</a> is available at
+  <dt id="ref-HTML5"><strong class="informref">[HTML5]</strong></dt>
+  <dd><cite class="w3ccr"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/CR-html5-20140204/">HTML5</a></cite>,
+  R. Berjon, S. Faulkner, T. Leithead, E. D. Navara, E. O'Connor, S. Pfeiffer, I. Hickson.
+  World Wide Web Consortium, <span class="wip">work in progress</span>, 04 February 2014.
+  <br />This edition of HTML5 is //www.w3.org/TR/2014/CR-html5-20140204/.
+  <br />The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/">latest edition of HTML5</a> is available at
   http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/.</dd>
 
+<!--
   <dt id="ref-NVDL"><strong class="informref">[NVDL]</strong></dt>
   <dd><cite><a href="http://www.jtc1sc34.org/repository/0694.pdf">Information Technology &#x2014; Document Schema Definition Languages (DSDL) &#x2014; Part 4: Namespace-based Validation Dispatching Language</a></cite>: ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-4:2005(E),
   International Organization for Standardization, December 2005.
@@ -1257,6 +1264,7 @@
   <br />This edition of XML Schema Part 2 is http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xmlschema-2-20041028/.
   <br />The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-2/">latest edition of XML Schema Part 2</a> is available at
   http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema-2/.</dd>
+-->
 </dl>
 
 <h2 id="Acknowledgments">Acknowledgments</h2>